[fic] Sungmin; Min/Everyone

[tryingtosay_]

Title: Sungmin
Fandom: SuJu
Pairing: Sungmin/Everyone
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1235
Notes: This took me a month, and I'm still horribly unsatisfied. I can't think up a proper name for this, either. I'm sorry for my writers block. This was the best I could do at the moment.

Comments

[heechul]

title: sungmin

lol yeah not a proper title but it's okay, i forgive you 8D only because of the shindong lips and i /just/ watched that card kissing game last night and it makes me giggle.

also because i love your description of kangin. he is just like that and for some reason, i don't think many people focus on that part of him <33 and heechul like fireworks is brilliant but it makes me sad :( i hate things that fade. shiwon is realistic, which is funny based on his description <3

kibum agh

but kyuhyun <333

i loved it <33 and i can't possibly see whore sungmin or slut sungmin in this because it seems like he was just looking for kyuhyun the whole time <3

[jaded_skys]

Hahahahaha! It was that or "Min's Got A Problem With Finding His Bandmates Hot." Any suggestions??

I think it's because he's my favorite, but Kangin's just such a bright person, it seems so infectious! Gah! I'm sorry the Rella part made you sad. I'll try writing a Heechul-centric fic to make up for it (oh god who do I pair?! Help~)

BUMMIE ONLY WANT HOT PRINCESS LOVIN'. WHO COULD BLAME HIM? XD

Thank you~!! I really wasn't trying for whoretastic!Min, so I'm relieved you didn't get that vibe~~!

♥♥♥♥♥

[heechul]

UM let me see. 'the sexventures of one lee sungmin' 8D

YECHUL OMG 8D they are all hotness everywhere <3333 or kyuchul lol

and no one can 8D not even sungmin.

<333

[jaded_skys]

XD But he didn't even sex up everyone!! Only like.... 5! *dies*

I haven't actually written a Yechul.... or a Kyuchul either. One of those shall be written! Hopefully I can get in done in less than a month. *cries*

WAIT, NO HAPPY?! YOU WANT ANGST?!?! THIS WILL BE HAARD~

... or just plain porn. Either or.

[hoyah]

this is a very touching idea, of how you can't meet your perfect love and get it all right the first time around. i think my only criticism (aside from a few forgotten punctuation here and there) is that you used the word "bright" to describe three different relationships and i kind of felt like all of these should be different. at the same time, though, 12 other boys is a lot to work with. and you did a stupendous job. n.n

[jaded_skys]

Aw, thanks. That's the whole feeling I was hoping to ge across!

Blah, that's kinda why I'm unhappy with this piece.... I'll probably re-write some parts of it, or at least, some of the adjective. I feel like I used all forms of "warm" waaay too much. Could you point out the puctuation mistakes? I'd like to fix those right away.

♥~~~~

[hoyah]

xD; actually, it seems more of the errors are those surrounding in subject-verb agreement, tenses, forgotten words, etc. the only punctuation error i can find now is...

bringing a smile to both friends faces at the memories

*friends'

-shot- I can try to point out some of the other errors, if you'd like. xD After my nap, anyway.

[jaded_skys]

Gah. I really need to double check my stuff before posting and stop posting at 3 or 4 am.

♥ That would be awesome, maybe e-mail them to me?? one_winged_angel_02 at hotmail dot com?

[firepixie620]

I really liked how you wrote a Sungmin x Everyone fic without making Sungmin look like a slut. I was a little worrie when I saw the pairing but decided to read it anyways. Good thing I did because I really like your fic. I think you did a great job all together.

[jaded_skys]

I tried hard to make him not seem like a slut, so that's a big compliment! Thank you~

[revvvolution_x]

KYU WINS ALL.

This was written incredibly well. It's gorgeous.

I so love you. =D

[jaded_skys]

I do love that kid~~

Thank you very much! ♥

[windsorcerer]

Wonderful, talented imagery! So well written. Loved every bit of it!

[jaded_skys]

Thank you very much!