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Merlin Fic: I Swallow The Sound And It Swallows Me Whole (Morgana/Gwen; PG13)

Mar 16, 2013 02:22

Title: I Swallow The Sound And It Swallows Me Whole
Fandom: Merlin
Pairing: Gwen/Morgana
Word Count: 594
Prompt(s): Written for the prompts 'short story' for writerverse, 'sound' for dailyfics, ' sound' for 100_women, 'broken' for fanfic50, 'broken' for lover100 and 'ghost' for 52_challenge.
Rating: PG13
Warnings: References to psychological torture.
Summary: For a while the screams become gentle ( Read more... )

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Comments 2

mihnn March 24 2013, 01:30:38 UTC

Out of all the sentences, this really struck me.

“Can you fix me, Guinevere? Can you love me again?”

This was so very twisted and deep and crazily brilliant. I love how you captured the madness Morgana was surrounded by at the end of the series. Yet, there’s a sliver of hope. She wants to be accepted, which is ultimately everything she’s ever wanted.

agirlnamedtruth March 24 2013, 05:11:45 UTC

Thank you!

Yes, I do think that acceptance is what drives her and that's why she became so insane by the end because she'd lost everyone and there was nobody left to accept her. Like, even if she'd won the war, she'd have had nobody to tell her she'd done the right thing.

I think that's also why she went after Gwen, I mean, she could have just broke in and stabbed Arthur in his sleep but instead she brainwashed Gwen into believing that she was the only one Gwen could trust.