Comments | truelyesoteric: Timestamp: When the World Ends; Return to Lender

truelyesoteric

Timestamp: When the World Ends; Return to Lender

Jan 10, 2011 11:57

Title: When the World Ends; Return to Lender (Timestamp ( Read more... )

Comments 17

serendip50 January 10 2011, 18:03:16 UTC

Beautifully evocative piece and full of tarnished love and familiar understanding.

Love the poetically symbolic ambiance that speaks volumes without being soft or obvious. xx

truelyesoteric January 11 2011, 03:02:10 UTC

That was so postitively sweet. I always get this longing type of feeling with lots of quiet in between when I read this. This is all about longing.

fedaykin_here January 11 2011, 01:12:23 UTC

Oh goodness. Such a good verse! Thanks so much for continuing to write fics from this verse. I would never get tired from reading it (of course it has the J2 forever!)....:)

truelyesoteric January 11 2011, 03:05:21 UTC

I'm glad you like it. It is so much fun for me too. I'm so very glad that you enjoyed it.

rocit63 January 11 2011, 01:42:06 UTC

Thank you for the timestamp, should you want to add more I would be happy to read it! ;)

truelyesoteric January 11 2011, 03:10:44 UTC

Thanks honey. I'll thinka bout it!

ou_peachus January 11 2011, 03:54:13 UTC

Honestly? It's my favorite one too.

The is very sweet and lovely.. even if it is the end of the world.

truelyesoteric January 11 2011, 16:42:41 UTC

I actually thought of you while writing this, I figured it would bring a smile to your face. I know this isn't everyone's cup of tea, but I like the angsty pull without drama thing that is happening here.

Hope all is well with you!

PS - I totally just abused your journal for recs. It was so good. Thank you so much for doing that!

ou_peachus January 16 2011, 13:19:07 UTC

Abuse me baby, abuse me. ;)

and again totally fucking awesome

truelyesoteric April 14 2011, 18:15:55 UTC

You are my favorite enabler.

roxymissrose January 11 2011, 06:30:13 UTC

Hunh! This gives me another take on the Hannah character. Strangely enough, her kind of arrogant statement made me like her more. I also like Jared's reaction to her statement, that he thinks a little about what went on before and seems to come to an understanding about the past and the future.

It was a real pleasure to see another story in this 'verse--I'm very fond of your Jared.

truelyesoteric April 14 2011, 18:19:17 UTC

Interesting. To me I have absolutely no idea what Hannah's deal is. Which is rare, usually characters are fully formed. She's just flat to me, some chick that Jensen was banging.

I'm a little facinated these days by the main characters being central and everybody else just being someone else. A chosen writting style or piss poor writing?

You decide.