Eeep!!! A first kiss! And a hot one at that! I love the confidence in Jensen here, and Jared just being, well, Jared. Great update! I can't wait until the next one. Hurry please? -)
I'm glad that you like the first kiss. I just love these incarnations of the boys. They're just so young and always changing. That is how I remember high school being. It is awesome.
I do think Chad has a brain in this one even if he tries to hide it. I'm glad he's watching Jared's back since obviously Jared's not watching anything but Jensen.
DUDE!!! That was just as awesome.. no, scratch that - it was AWESOMER (shuddup.. it is so a word) than I could've imagined.
Jensen's caution is still in tact, but his walls are crumbling. While I kinda wanted to see him less guarded I think that the fact that he's still a bit standoffish is just as it should be. Once bitten, twice shy and all.
Jared - sigh, what can I say. He's just friggin adorable here. I love looking through his eyes at Jensen, and that little internal dialogue that's constantly checking in with him. And I love the degree to which his crush has progressed and how he's all in. And those things, those make me scared for him. He's fallen hard and if this gets bad...
Same for Jensen too. I think he's fallen hard too and what he's doing is more out of self-preservation and if this goes bad...
I appreciate your poetic liscence of the english language it is something I often embrace.
Awww your instinct. It is maybe on par. I kinda think that they might like ach other. It is a vague consideration. There is going to be a climactic action to the plot (that just makes it sound like they're going to have sex, which they probably are, but that isn't what I meant)
I think they're already in love, but who knows.
Your tude is probably right. I love the angst, just a little bit. But I hate unhappy endings. I've tried but then I have to write something to make it happy. I just can't let people do happily ever after i a sad way.
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Eeep!!! A first kiss! And a hot one at that! I love the confidence in Jensen here, and Jared just being, well, Jared. Great update! I can't wait until the next one. Hurry please? -)
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I'm glad that you like the first kiss. I just love these incarnations of the boys. They're just so young and always changing. That is how I remember high school being. It is awesome.
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Seriously, this is adorable, times a billion.
Can't wait for more!! :D
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I'm glad that you are in squeeland!
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He's kind of just an awesome, albiet inappropriate BFF>
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Jensen's caution is still in tact, but his walls are crumbling. While I kinda wanted to see him less guarded I think that the fact that he's still a bit standoffish is just as it should be. Once bitten, twice shy and all.
Jared - sigh, what can I say. He's just friggin adorable here. I love looking through his eyes at Jensen, and that little internal dialogue that's constantly checking in with him. And I love the degree to which his crush has progressed and how he's all in. And those things, those make me scared for him. He's fallen hard and if this gets bad...
Same for Jensen too. I think he's fallen hard too and what he's doing is more out of self-preservation and if this goes bad...
Wow. That's a very pessimistic attitude eh? LOL
Anyway, can't wait for more!
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Awww your instinct. It is maybe on par. I kinda think that they might like ach other. It is a vague consideration. There is going to be a climactic action to the plot (that just makes it sound like they're going to have sex, which they probably are, but that isn't what I meant)
I think they're already in love, but who knows.
Your tude is probably right. I love the angst, just a little bit. But I hate unhappy endings. I've tried but then I have to write something to make it happy. I just can't let people do happily ever after i a sad way.
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i'm so looking forward to more of this fic!
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