Comments | truecoloured: one-shot。trustworthy。

truecoloured

one-shot。trustworthy。

Jul 09, 2010 03:09

trustworthy。| hyunjoong/kyujong, (hinted jungmin/youngsaeng.)。| pg-13
kyujong realizes how important it is to have a leader when he's almost gone。
三1,020 words。

( the news of hyunjoong's new management hits kyujong and all the other members like a brick. )

f: ss501, l: 1000——5000, t: one-shot, p: hyunjoong/kyujong, r: pg-13

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dimentionally July 9 2010, 07:16:45 UTC

Alright, SS501 and you have turned me into a kyujong/hyunjoong shipper. How do you do this?

This line:
but kyujong is busy trying to understand. he doesn't understand how things can change and yet stay the same.
I really like this line because, well, it's so true. Things are always changing around people, even if they aren't really changing. It just fits so well.

Fave part:
"trust me," hyunjoong whispers, and kyujong realizes he's been shaking a little and there's the possibility that the wet against his face isn't saliva, but tears. if he could see in the dark, he's sure he would see that earnest stare, those pretty lips slightly parted and those eyes wide.
I really love how almost detached Kyujong is, like he doesn't realize he's shaking. Plus, he doesn't realize that he is crying. It's so real and raw.

Honestly I loved this to bits. And I was honored to help.

truecoloured July 9 2010, 07:42:33 UTC

why hello there, stalker.

thank you! i feel like this was probably a bit over dramatic, and realistically, i'm sure this was handled much differently with plenty of notice from the others. i'm a cruel, cruel person, however, and i can't help but run off with peoples souls.

i promise, without your help, it wouldn't be very "enjoyed" at all. thank you again! :)

dimentionally July 9 2010, 20:11:54 UTC

Hello there,

It didn't seem over dramatic to me, please write more dear friend.

truecoloured July 9 2010, 20:23:40 UTC

well good, i'm glad then. thank you for being so kind!

renichifreak July 9 2010, 07:49:40 UTC

holy hell. this was awesome...

I'm reading this on my way to work and m a bit teary eyed...

SS hwaiting~!!

truecoloured July 9 2010, 07:53:19 UTC

wow, you're really fast! i refreshed the page and it scared me a little to see this here. thank you for reading, sorry for making you teary eyed, i hope you have a wonderful work day anyway!

renichifreak July 9 2010, 07:57:47 UTC

Ask around...I,m a ninja~ hehe

I won't since it's 4am and it's Target, but thanks anyway, bbb~~!!

XDD

truecoloured July 9 2010, 08:04:10 UTC

i shall discover your secret then, and find some way to steal candy from sleepy children also. chin up darling, it's only a job. good luck. :)

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hyunaepark July 9 2010, 07:55:09 UTC

The rawness of this story made me tear up a bit ;~; -wibbles-
<3 I honestly hope I get to see more of your work, dear.<3
That was really touching, and usually HyunKyu isn't one of my favorite pairings.
<3

truecoloured July 9 2010, 07:58:21 UTC

i'll definitely hope to find more muses then, thank you for taking the time to read!

rubi_rene July 9 2010, 08:01:12 UTC

even though jungmin is throwing things around in the living room
I can see this playing out in my mind so perfectly. This is so what Jungmin would do.

he presses his face into the soft fur of his large teddy bear, his best sleeping partner; the kind that never leaves.
Oh kyu ;~;

This was so so good dear :)

truecoloured July 9 2010, 08:06:13 UTC

oh good, one characterization semi-down, four more to go! thanks for reading, you're all ninja's here. :O

yeonah July 9 2010, 11:33:18 UTC

This just made me all sorts of wibbly and happy and you wrote this so well! I think this sort of thing needs to be written, with what's going on, but everyone's kinda holding their breath and stepping around eggshells cause no one really wants to talk about it, but you put it into words perfectly.

I love how Kyu goes through the thought process here, and we can just feel everything shattering, but the end gives us hope <3

I think this fic reminds us all that we just have to trust in them...plain and simple.

You turn a complicated issue into something everyone can understand and hats off to you for writing this <333

...and that was my logical rant, because truth is I'm kinda sniffly and teary-eyed, so LOL <3

Good job bb <333

And I didn't squeal at the ninja!MinSaeng. Not at all. >.> <.<

truecoloured July 9 2010, 17:21:04 UTC

i actually figured there'd be a million fics about this going around, and that no one would read this because i'd be part of the bandwagon. however, it became the opposite, it seems. thank you! the minsaeng is all this gif's fault. and now i'm going to ask the question because you seem like such a logical mind; how were their personalities? :(

yeonah July 10 2010, 00:29:15 UTC

LOL No. I've only seen one before yours.

That gif is LOVE~~~~ <3333 /clings to them

Your interpretation on their personalities is fantastic in my opinion <3 It's hard for ANYONE to match the personality of a real person, especially celebrities, but you did a great job. I could imagine them reacting the way they did, and everything right down to the HyunKyu talk in bed didn't stray out of character at all.

Now my logical mind is gonna revert back to my fangirly mind so I can spazz this fic to death <3333

truecoloured July 10 2010, 00:36:24 UTC

i'm a shameless gif addict. which poses a problem once in a while, i suppose. and you're right, it is difficult, though i suppose a well written character would be one so well rounded that they're believable. you're logical mind is just as wonderful as your fangirl mode, i apologize for giving you such poor literature to spazz over. ♥

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