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truecoloured

oneshot。i'm your man。

Aug 30, 2011 23:24

i'm your man。| hyunjoong/hyungjoon。| pg。
normal is all he's ever known how to be。
三2,033 words。

note: for the gyonggo challenge, using the prompt "bully." hello all, long time no see.

( He hears girls talking about him as he walks down the hallway, and when he smiles he has to wince because they all squeal, really loudly. )

r: pg, f: ss501, l: 1000——5000, t: one-shot, p: hyunjoong/hyungjoon

Comments 10

renichifreak August 31 2011, 03:35:43 UTC

okay...that was adorable~~~~~~~~~~

I was like, grinning the entire time~

truecoloured August 31 2011, 18:11:29 UTC

thank you :)

mskatness August 31 2011, 03:40:29 UTC

daaawwwwwww

i've missed your writing so much, you're so good at their characterizations <333

This was cute, yet interesting.

truecoloured August 31 2011, 18:11:55 UTC

i missed you, too. thank you, i'm glad you liked it. :)

hyunaepark August 31 2011, 03:44:13 UTC

:D that. was. adorable near the end.
<3

truecoloured August 31 2011, 18:12:07 UTC

thanks! :)

rawrstarrr August 31 2011, 09:52:39 UTC

DEARLAWRDTHISISBEAUTIFUL!!!!!! <3

Romantic and sweet and cheesy and amaziiiiiiiiiingg!!!!!!!

THIS IS AMAZING!!!! :333

I LOVE THIS EXTREMELY!!!!

truecoloured August 31 2011, 18:12:26 UTC

oh, thank you so much :)

aumint September 3 2011, 15:28:45 UTC

i know i have said this before, but your writing is superb.

the base story was heartbreaking, because this happens around the world...everyday. i loved the balance of sweetness and bitterness in this. you write hyunjoong perfectly i think, perfectly. he's such a strange kid♥

i'm not one to usually read this pairing at all, but i saw your name and i just had to.

truecoloured September 3 2011, 19:54:49 UTC

oh, thank you! i'm glad you like the way i write hyunjoong, i never know if he's crazy enough or if he's too normal. thank you for reading this even though you don't even like this pairing. to be honest, it's not my favorite of pairings either, but i thought the prompt was interesting - thank you again!