E.R./X-Men: Allegiance [7/8]

[trovia]

Title: Allegiance
Fandoms: E.R./X-Men Movieverse
Spoilers: Up to the end of E.R. season 13, rewriting "I don't," rewriting X2, and ignoring everything that came afterwards on both fronts, except for some backstory borrowed from X3
Characters: Ray, Neela, Jean, Xavier, Abby, Cyclops, Kovac, Gates & pretty much all the X2 ensemble
Pairings: Ray/Neela

Comments

[scribble_myname]

Yes! You have made me so happy, fixing the worst of what could and would have happened! I'm so ready for what you have next. Awesome, awesome, awesome.

[trovia]

That was one of the fun parts, figuring out that using the force fields as a mutation would mean Jean wouldn't die. :D Thank you so much! I hope you'll like the last part as well.

[ofsoapsuds]

THIS WAS GREAT!!!

[trovia]

Thank you!

[lorrainemarker]

You used such wonderful little details in this. I loved the scene of Neela talking to Johnny exactly like an adult should talk to a idiot teenager (which he certainly was). Also, your description of the chaos at the end with the details of how pale Rouge was and Logan's clothes being shredded created a wonderful visual. Not to mention you fixed the end :)

[trovia]

I'd say John and Neela were a scene I was looking forward to, but really I was too distracted trying to figure out WHY THE HELL ROGUE LAUNCHED THE JET in the original battle in the movie. I still haven't found out. It seems that fancy just struck her. ;)

Fixing the end, however, was a pleasure. :) Thank you! I hope you'll like the last part as well.

[jebbypal]

Oh wow. Just rewatched this on sunday . Vreat twists here

[trovia]

Thanks so much. :) I hope you'll like the last part.

[anonymous]

I like your version better!!!

*starts campaign for a re-do of the movies*

[trovia]

Thank you so much! I'll join that campaign.

It's lovely to get a comment from a person who isn't on LJ. I know that makes one more reluctant to comment.