Comments | troublemaker_98: no chance. (prologue)

troublemaker_98

no chance. (prologue)

May 13, 2012 17:46

inside: gore, murder, kyuhyun and present tense. not for the faint-hearted, or the braver, though both are welcome to attempt a read.

( A twisted fairytale of a psychopath, a fallen angel, a mirrored reflection and an ice statue. )

series: no chance, genre: horror, genre: au, fandom: super junior, pairing: kyuwook, length: chaptered

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ilukyuwook May 13 2012, 10:22:58 UTC

Interesting...I'm wondering if kyu has split personality or if it's a different person
but can't tell since its just prologue:) hope its not too dark? Or angst? Lol I'm all about
rainbows and butterfly...thankyu:)

troublemaker_98 May 13 2012, 10:46:33 UTC

It won't be too dark for the next few chapters or so, but we're not promising anything. ;) And as for the split personality, you'll have to wait until chapter one is out. *evil*

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)

hehehe08 May 15 2012, 10:54:17 UTC

Absolutely captivating!

I really love your writing style - everything just flows so beautifully... And your descriptions are right on: they provide a clear insight into the action, but leave more than ample space for imagination.

And I won't even try to guess who did what or who is what - I'll trust you with my curiosity, and let you write me through it. And I'll enjoy every second of it, I'm sure.

I can't wait to read your updates. XD

troublemaker_98 May 15 2012, 13:15:16 UTC

*squeal*

Honestly, your comment is just the nicest thing ever; probably well worth the days this didn't receive comments on (perhaps we're invisible and you have laser eyes or something). Complimenting our writing is possibly the best thing you can do to us to make us worship you forever. xP

We're going to be updating soon, so keep your eyes peeled; we're pretty sure you're going to enjoy the next update if you liked this one so much.

Thank you from the bottom of our KyuWooked hearts. :)

hehehe08 May 15 2012, 13:25:55 UTC

You know what, though?

Some of the best stories I've read had the fewest comments. It depends on so many factors: when it was posted, who the OTP is (more popular OTPs get more comments, of course), how long the authors have been active on the website.... and let's not forget the silent readers, and those who don't have Live Journal accounts.

Don't fret: you're new to the community, and with your talent, your stories will be flooded with comments in no time.

I'm sure.

And yes. I have laser eyes, and a bionic nose: I can smell talent even through my computer screen. Now that's gotta be something.

*talks to myself* Gotta be something. Come on', I mean....

*leaves mumbling to self*

troublemaker_98 May 15 2012, 13:33:16 UTC

I just visited your journal (oh, this teenage Alzheimer's!) and realized that you were the one who wrote this one smut!fic we were really stunned over. I feel as if I should ask for an autograph!

Very true; even if the fandom is small and each work doesn't get too much comment love, it doesn't mean it's terrible. (We hope that's the case with this!) Still, who doesn't love a comment - especially a comment as awesome as the one you gave us. :D

Ooh, smell-o-vision? I've always wanted that. You are one, lucky, talented writer; kickass writing in addition to talent-sniffing. Killer combination. :P

Oh, and people who talk to themselves just automatically become cooler in our books. Just sayin'! :D

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