And as we both collapsed back onto the sheets and he rolled over beside me and we were panting, trying to catch our breaths, all that was going through my mind was just this: everything was perfect
( ... )
Ahh I can't decide if I want to write the whole thing from Jr's pov, switch up povs, or go into third person narration ;( I have ideas for all of them but it's so different
[1/Act 2] Re: Dillinger Jr/Sam — Romantic Comedy style
anonymous
March 25 2011, 06:18:03 UTC
Sam toyed with the coffee cup in his hand as he stared out the window, watching the people walk past the cafe. He was waiting for his boyfriend -just the thought of that word prompted a smile to creep across his face -boyfriend. He fondled the cup absentmindedly as his thoughts drifted back before they met, before he even knew of Sam's existance
( ... )
I am enjoying this far more than I thought I would. I *love* the way you write Jr's perspective, and I'm super excited that you'll be using it again, although this scene still works from an omniscient POV. (Kinda like how, in a movie of that nature, the narrator doesn't narrate EVERY scene.)
Re: [2/Act 2] Re: Dillinger Jr/Sam — Romantic Comedy style
anonymous
March 29 2011, 04:04:10 UTC
haha, yeah it's def more fun inside Jr's head, though he is one damn unreliable narrator. I just saw those DVD bonuses for Legacy with all those TR3N hints, so everything I have planned about his dad/backstory will be AU :| this irks me but everything about this is AU so meh. I'll (hopefully) have something up tomorrow. I'm estimating a 9-part total deal here
[1/3] Not Awkward At All - Re: Dillinger Jr/Sam — Romantic Comedy style
anonymous
March 30 2011, 06:05:53 UTC
Just throwing this out there, but when Sam said he wanted to talk, I thought he was going to, y'know, explain things, maybe. Because now I'm really just more confused than ever, but hey -he's okay, and that's all that matters, right? But okay, I get that his dad's just come back from who knows where and he's got a lot on his plate at the moment. I get that, really. I did, I did understand that
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[2/3] Not Awkward At All - Re: Dillinger Jr/Sam — Romantic Comedy style
anonymous
March 30 2011, 06:07:01 UTC
I must've looked like an idiot for staring at the nameplate on his desk for a good twenty-seconds or so before tripping over myself to place the report on his desk. Kevin Flynn, it said. Yep this was his office. Seriously, how did I not know that? I was so caught up with nerves I couldn't even remember whose office it used to be
( ... )
Kevin's alive (doesn't matter how), and now that he's back there are a number of things he needs to learn about his son. Like his attraction to Eddie.
I want it fluffy and hilarious. With Kevin's only problem being who Sam likes, not their gender. <3
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