Hope in the Mirror [4/4]

[trollsttroll]

Title: Hope in the Mirror [4/4]
Authors: trollsttroll & mildly_neurotic
Beta: slash_scion
Fandom: Fall Out Boy
Rating: R
Pairing: Pete Wentz; this is not a typo.
Word Count: 5,550 this part; 20,532 overall
Disclaimer: Not real, not assumed to be real. It’s fiction and it’s fun.
Summary: Pete Wentz has spent his entire life fighting off sleep; his adulthood, not just his

Comments

[mycherryred]

My god....that was amazing you guys. The imagery and the split between the worlds...I have no words. I'm favouriting so i can read again and again.

Also, you made me like the Wentz...seriously spectacular fic guys!

[trollsttroll]

Awww! To know that you are fav-ing it and what not is awesome.

You're awesome for reading it despite not being into Wentz too.

[ashesintwilight]

ok so, i actually liked that, but I'm going to give that to the talent both of you possess as writers and NOTHING to do with the Wentz. I really loved the differences between the worlds and the Pete's and how they interacted together. It was really spectacular.

[trollsttroll]

It totally has to do with the Wentz... you're just in denial, woman! ;)

Thanks though, seriously, for reading and commenting. Glad we got the message we wanted to convey about their worlds across.

[littlewitch34]

i'm one of those terrible people that read and didn't review. I'm wicked sorry and didn't have time.

I'm so, so intrigued by this. By Peter and Pete. It's amazing, what you wrote. At first I was a tiny bit lost, but I got into it and let myself be lost without thinking about it. I loved how Pete was teaching Peter different things, and how they're comforting each other. It's just wonderful.

[trollsttroll]

Sorry for the whiny post... yesterday was a bad day for me. Thanks for commenting though... it does validate the writing. *hugs*

We tried to write a whole other world that was easy to get lost in when we wrote Peter's world. Glad it sounds like we suceeded.

:D

[littlewitch34]

You're absolutely right though. It's not fair to read and not comment. I mean, one or two people... but when you have a hit count that high with two replies? It sucks. I know it does.

I liked the idea that it's based on Boy With The Thorn In His Side.

[trollsttroll]

:D

Yeah, me and mildly_neurotic were IMing one day and The Boy with the Thorn in His Side came up... and this inkling of an idea came out. Nightmares and Pete... how could we write something about that... and viola!

It's the distinct difference in views and comments that bothers me actually. I get that ppl lurk cuz I use to... but like today it's up to 85 views and 3 comments? Um, what?

[lions_roar83]

Wow, I must say I've never read anything like this. It was beautiful. The haunting, eerie feel definitely added to that beauty.

I really like that you two managed to capture both the plotline and characters perfectly, and I think the ending worked fantastically as well.

Magnificent job! It's great to see something so unique and well done. :)

[trollsttroll]

Thank you so much for the awesome comment. It's been ages since we posted, but we worked so hard on thsi fic... it's really worthwhile to get comments on it!

And all I can really do at your compliments is blush... and say thank you.