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For What It's Worth

Sep 29, 2008 06:17

Title: For What It’s Worth
Fandom: My Chemical Romance
Category: One shot; exorcism...
Pairings: Implied Ray Toro/James Dewees, past Bert/Gerard - Bert/Gerard/Ray - Bert/Ray - Gerard/Ray, present Gerard/Lyn-Z and Ray/Christa...
POV: Ray’s; 1st person...
Rating: NC-17 in a manner of speaking...
Word Count: ~1700
Summary: Ray has something to ( Read more... )

christa, reggie, exorcism, lyn-z, mcr, bert, fic, au, nc-17, msi, gerard, james, ray, the used

Comments 4

absinthe_memory September 29 2008, 15:08:27 UTC

Oh the angst! *grabs chest* I like it, I really do like it, though there's a hate for the implications of a certain McCracken doing a something to a someone. *shudder* Meanie! But yeah, someone has to be the bad guy... and you sorta made me hate Gerard. Just for this though. Just for this.

Awesome. :)

trollsttroll September 29 2008, 15:33:10 UTC

I know, I know... I fell victim to the McCracken cliche... I'm sorry!!! Forgive me?

*lip quiver*

And o.O! Hate Gerard? Well, how do you like that. One of my favorite characters and I make you hate him... though admittedly not my favorite character in this particular piece.

I'm glad you liked it despite what I did to Bert.

♥

mildly_neurotic September 29 2008, 15:17:37 UTC

It wasn't clear to me if Ray is speaking to Gerard in actuality or just voicing to himself the things he'd like to say to him. I decided the vacuum of Gee respnses must mean it was an internal monolgue. :-)

Holy evil Bert! I felt so bad for Ray and angry with Gerard for letting Bert use them both like that.

It seems like Ray still loves Gerard a bit too. Almost like he'd like to rub Christa's unconditional love in his face.

I think it was good for the Ray character to talk out and work through the demons of his past. I hope it gave him some sort of closure.

trollsttroll September 29 2008, 15:36:38 UTC

Oh! I could so write a Gerard reply. Oh, wow.

Yeah, I can't even beliee I wrote Bert so evil. And that I let that shit happen to Ray. I mean, come on, it's Ray and his best fucking friend... and what do I let happen?

I think you are onto something in your pondersings over Ray still loving Gerard and rubbing Christa's love in a certain person's face.

Thank you for reading it despite it's angst...

♥