Three Murders And It's Only Monday

[trollsttroll]

Title: Three Murders And It's Only Monday
Fandom: My Chemical Romance
Pairing: Gerard/Frank
Rating: Strong R
Warning: Is it a deathfic or isn't it? You decide...
Disclaimer: Fiction. Learn it, live it, love it.
Summary: Captivity, even when it's for our own good, can lead to madness...
Author's Note: Inspired by but also extended upon... Early

Comments

[justxblondie]

this is so beautiful.

[trollsttroll]

Thank you so much! ♥

[absinthe_memory]

I don't know how many times I can say this, but I suppose once more is good, and so I will. I was dead-on when I said theatrical last night. ♥

This is where I think you shine the most, for me at least, things exactly like this. They make me speechless, and I sit and wonder, read over again.

xox.

[trollsttroll]

I was dead-on when I said theatrical last night. ♥
-->Still don't get why you thought that would offend me... I'm very complimented.

This is where I think you shine the most, for me at least, things exactly like this. They make me speechless, and I sit and wonder, read over again.
-->Strangely enough. This is where I feel most at ease.

[trollsttroll]

Thank you! ♥

[snowisgreat]

that was some pretty nasty images you created there. the bodybags, corpses heated by the sun. very uncomfortable mood, well done. (and that was a compliment, in case you weren't sure)

These words changing nothing. You hear me? They change nothing. Nothing! Please... don't let them mean anything. They're just words, right?
Loved how you "extended" this from the lyrics and gave it a twist, made him suddenly doubt things. Really nice.

basically, all was really nice, in that uncomfortable way that you seem so damn good at writing :D

[trollsttroll]

Yeah, I totally squealed upon receiving your comment. On this particular style of my writing... I just love how you consume and view them.

that was some pretty nasty images you created there. the bodybags, corpses heated by the sun. very uncomfortable mood, well done. (and that was a compliment, in case you weren't sure)
-->From you, I'd take it as nothing other than a compliment... simply because you seem to get me.

"These words changing nothing. You hear me? They change nothing. Nothing! Please... don't let them mean anything. They're just words, right?"
Loved how you "extended" this from the lyrics and gave it a twist, made him suddenly doubt things. Really nice.
-->Thank you! I love writing these and twisting lyrics. Quite honestly.

basically, all was really nice, in that uncomfortable way that you seem so damn good at writing :D
-->The sad thing here is that I seem to put off a lot of readers with that "uncomfortable way"... *bites lips*

Still love you and your comments! ♥

[snowisgreat]

hahaha, and i love how you make me feel all... clever and smart LOL
But seriously though, by now it is very limited how much fanfic I'm reading simply because there seem to be such a pile of crap out there and I'm not one to dig thru all that shit to find one corn to eat, you know? So you people that I know can write - you're like my lifeline to good writing and I'm just clinging on for dear life and consuming it eagerly :D

And I love you and your stories! ♥ :D

[trollsttroll]

♥

[mildly_neurotic]

As usually this is lyrical. Beautifully crafted and haunting. You wound my delicate sensibilities with your murderous ways, but I still love you. :-)

[trollsttroll]

Thank you for reading it. Your opinion means a lot...

And your comment, my dear, is just as lyrical.

♥ I love you too!