Flashes of Light

[trollsttroll]

Title: Flashes of Light
Chapter: 2
Fandom: Jackass/Viva La Bam/HIM AU
Rating: R
Pairing: Bam/Ville
Warning: Angst, but it leads to something better I promise…
Disclaimer: Fiction, look it up...
Word Count: 1348
Summary: In a flash of light, everything changes...

Chapter 1

Comments

[sjpheartshim]

Aww the beginning was so sad. You almost made me cry which isn't good because it would be weird of me to cry in a library. But I am happy about Bam sticking with Ville and Ville understanding that. Can't wait for more =)

Oh and in the first sentence you put breathe just hitched and I'm pretty sure it should be breath just hitched.

[mildly_neurotic]

It's just so sad that it took the accident for Bam to realise how much Ville meant to him sober. But it's beautiful that under the circumstances he still feels that love and isn't willng to give up on him. It's as heart warming as it is breaking.

[jezebel1386]

Beautifully written. I love how this isn't overly candy coated: how there's doubt and trouble mixed in with the idea that it will eventually be okay. Very well done.

[slasher48]

I'm pretty sure by now, you know exactly how much I love your writing.

But just in case, I'll tell you again.

I FUCKING LOVE YOUR WRITING.

You're a fantastic, magnificent, stellar, phenomenal, brilliant, wonderful writer, and I enjoy every single SECOND of reading the words you write.

This story is no different. Your normal style of writing Bam and Ville exactly as they should be and the realistic lack of cutesy-dom and happy dancing through the field of daisies is present, as is your extensive vocabulary and just general understanding of the world and how love and life work. Again, phenomenal.

I only beg that you write more for me very very soon.

I've bestowed this on a few, but you've earned it by leaps and bounds. You. Are. A. Goddess. :D

♥

[slasher48]

With all that well-earned gushing done, let me just point out that in the first paragraph you're mom should be your

Again, love it.