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Resistance

Jun 28, 2007 00:18

Title: Resistance
Authors: absinthe_memory & trollsttroll
Chapter: 3
Fandom: Jackass/Viva La Bam/Him/Negative
Rating: Mild NC-17
Pairing: Bam/Jonne
Disclaimer: Fiction. You love it...
Word Count: 1297
Summary: When does hatred cross a line and become something more?
Authors’ Note: Recently created, glitterf_ck - a Bam/Jonne Community, it’s airborne...

Chapter 1, Chapter 2
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bam, jackass, jam, fic, him, ficgasm, nc-17, vlb, jonne, negative

Comments 6

i_be_jimi June 28 2007, 04:42:54 UTC

eep!
thats hot and i kinda feel bad for both of them...in a really wierd way...

ashesintwilight June 28 2007, 04:49:51 UTC

fan-f*cking-tastic as always girls :) I was wondering when you were going to post another chapter. I'm enjoying this one so far. It's like watching a volcano smoke and hiss and bubble and just waiting for the eruption to hit...I'm eagerly awaiting the full blown eruption between bam and jonne, because if this mini-tease was any sign, it will be incredible and probably violent :)

fadedpictures13 June 28 2007, 05:14:18 UTC

Mmmm. Haha. I love it.
Yeah.
They're both kinda mind fucks.
But yes. I really liked this.
As usual.
<333 Keep it uuup!

owlgrey June 28 2007, 10:25:13 UTC

I like the underlying anger in this.

koipondering June 28 2007, 14:05:25 UTC

Wonderful work again ladies. There is a fantastic chemistry that’s being set up, I’m enjoying especially the fact that Bam has become obsessed unbeknownst to even himself. The fact that each little detail is on the cusp between annoying the crap out of him and that his body seems to be translating it to a much different blood boil. Here are some of my favorite areas.

He inhales sharply and the ragged sound of his breathing for just a moment reminds me of someone I dare not name…

I can tell you exactly why this is so perfect to me, it rings very clear of the spirit of Oscar Wilde “And the love that dare not speak its name”. So fantastically taboo and yet emotional. Ace visual.

He wanted this… he’s been gunning for it since he walked in the door.

What will Ville think of his precious little princess now?

I really like the feel of trying to redirect the emotion in to anger.

And fuck me if that’s all it takes. I’m pulsing and shit in my pants. This seems like an odd thing to highlight, but the thing I REALLY love is that ( ... )