Incarnate

May 20, 2007 23:07

Title: Incarnate
Chapter: 6
Fandom: Jackass/Viva La Bam/HIM AU
Rating: R
Pairing: Bam/Ville, Bam/Ville/Ryan
Warning: Sex is violence...
Disclaimer: Ownership is an abstract concept...
Word Count: 2222
Summary: Bam was just waiting for someone, anyone to try and break him...
Dedicated to and inspired by: Abysmal Seraph & Johnny Darko
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bam, jackass, ryan, r, kink, ville, fic, him, violence, vlb

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mildly_neurotic May 21 2007, 04:03:33 UTC
Emotionally this is one of the darker things you've written I think. I get a gut reaction to it but I'm not sure how descibe it. Every facet of their relationship with each other and Ryan is so conflicted.

Your worlds are addictive.

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trollsttroll May 21 2007, 04:34:00 UTC
One of the darker things? You really think so? I suppose that my current emotional roller-coaster has aided in my creative process... (Probably also explains why Acts has been so hard to jump back into...)

Always happy to have you along for the ride in any fandom...

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mildly_neurotic May 21 2007, 12:07:18 UTC
Let me ammend that by saying one of your darkest Dugeras, but yes I do. And I agree it's probably a reflection of the fact life has been sort of kicking you while you are down as of late. Its actually kind of cool that you have a creative outlet like this to help you work off some of the stress that you are going through though. I hope it helps at least a little.

Anyway back to the boys. Bam and Ville are about as dysfunctional as you can get when Bam expresses a desire to not have their love making be a battle anymore and Ville takes that as him breaking up with him. It was one of the most interesting miscommunications I've seen in a fan fic. And Ryan, he knows for a fact they are screwed the fuck up, knows getting involved is probably a big mistake, but come on who could resist being the meat in a Bam & Ville sandwich?

Yea it's emotionally dark, but like all your stuff, still god dammn alluring. :-)

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absinthe_memory May 21 2007, 04:37:35 UTC
I'd write something coherent but I'm in awe... forgive me.

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trollsttroll May 21 2007, 05:01:02 UTC
You are forgiven... *hands you back your jaw* But come one... are you coherent yet? *leers*

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elterriblefizzy May 21 2007, 05:59:50 UTC
Don't break them up.

I'll cry.

I don't want to cry.

I rarely really want stories to end happily.

Make my dreams come true.

<3

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fadedpictures13 May 21 2007, 06:53:51 UTC
Holy sad;fljkabsopgb.
I loved it.
It's a lot sadder than usual.
But god damn. I lerved ittttt.
Almost as much as I lerveeee youuuu. <333

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randomlove192 May 21 2007, 06:55:49 UTC
The dynamics of this relationship are incredible. You've created such a strikingly realistic and amazing world and relationship that you sympathize and nearly become the characters. It's not just Ville's point of view anymore, it's the reader's point of view. The emotions are almost tangible, and it's like you've known their lives from the start.

I am in awe of your talent, truly in awe. There is no word in my vocabulary to describe how this has affected me. You do realize you are now ranked among the Gods I worship in the world of Slash, right? I bow to your supreme talent and heavenly writing.

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