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Culmination

Oct 28, 2006 19:38

Title: Culmination
Chapter: 4
Fandom: Jackass/Viva La Bam
Rating: Very NC-17
Pairing: Bam/Ryan/Johnny, Ryan/Johnny
Warning: Spoilers for Viva La Bam’s Fort Knoxville, Jackass 1 & 2...
Disclaimer: It’s fiction. Learn it, live it... love it.
Word Count: 2434
Summary: A follow-up to the branding incident...
Author’s Note: Actual continuity ( Read more... )

dunn, bam, jackass, knoxville, fic, vlb, nc-17

Comments 40

writerofictions October 29 2006, 03:50:19 UTC

I love this story! It's great!

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 03:56:52 UTC

So glad! Thanks for reading and leaving a comment! They really, really help feed my muse!

writerofictions October 29 2006, 03:58:22 UTC

Haha, I hope your muse cranks out another chapter soon cause I'm addictedly addicted.

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 04:02:38 UTC

Honestly... this chapter was originally over 5000 words... I decided to split it into another chapter. So number 5 is on the editing block... and should be posted in the next day or so!

Woot! for addiction! (Yeah, I'm supporting your addiction..)

Thread 8

hmcgirl October 29 2006, 05:10:25 UTC

I SOO look forward to more chapters from this story. I squeed when I saw there was a new one.

Poor, infected Bam, hehe. Do you plan on including the riot bomb bit in this fic? I just realized that Bam gets REALLY hurt a bunch in the movie!

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 12:25:03 UTC

Hehehe! You've been on my flist for how long and I've finally written something that has you commenting like mad and squeeing?! YES!

And man you freaking creepy! Each comment you make reference to something I've mentioned or done in the next chapter! I make mention of the riot bomb in the next bit! Creepy!

Bam is totally whaled upon in the movie... I kinda consider karma... heh.

hmcgirl October 29 2006, 14:43:31 UTC

I must have magical powers!!!

"Hehehe! You've been on my flist for how long and I've finally written something that has you commenting like mad and squeeing?! YES!"

What can I say, Bam is my new "guy." Guess who just bought like, EVERY season of Viva La Bam? Yeah, me.

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 15:36:09 UTC

You have the gift of sight girl! *heh* Yeah... *ahem*

Bam and uh... some of his peers are my new guys as well... but Bam's the main one.

Dude! I just did that recently too... except add on Jackass 1 and the Jackass boxset... over the span of a couple weeks...

Yeah, my debit card is sizzling...

sirius_faith October 29 2006, 07:19:53 UTC

Another great chapter! I'm so glad you're keeping this going 'cause I'm loving it!

I loved the little bit with Johnny and Ryan. I've been on such a Knoxville kick lately though, so that might explain it. ^_-

Can't wait for the next bit!

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 12:28:54 UTC

So glad that people are keeping on reading it too! It makes updating and writing new chapters so... inspired!

Yay about you loving the Ryan/Johnny! I think a lot of my readers on this fic are dugera faithfuls so...

And dude, you are the only one on a knoxville kick! I can brighten my entire day just by watching a skit of him laughing his ass off and squealing. My favorite is one Jackass Vol 3 (I think.) Where he's at home and has a mic taped to his cousin's ass while he passes gas. His cousin, of course, craps himself... the funny part? Knoxville's mom grabs the poo in a paper towel and proceeds to chase and corner Johnny on the couch... where he can't move for laughing and squealing.

BEST SKIT EVER.

sirius_faith October 29 2006, 22:50:24 UTC

Believe me I'm a faithful Dugera fan as well....but Johnny has invaded my brain so I'm loving every little bit about him in this fic and can't wait to see more of him with Bam and Ryan!

Besides, I don't think I've ever seen these three together in a story, so the rarity of it has me dying for more of the three fo them.

I love that skit! It's so funny and totally explains how Johnny can be the way he is if his family's like that! Watching him just laughing like a maniac is always a mood booster! After reading a new chapter of your story I usually end up watching the jackass boxset just to see him laugh. XD

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 23:35:49 UTC

I've never seen them together either... and chatting with my friend Seraph... the bunny spontaneously popped into existance ... and here we are...

Hee. And did you catch the name they gave for Johnny's mom?

Lynne Chattanooga

*blinks*

Johnny Knoxiville

Heheh.

Thread 6

mildly_neurotic October 29 2006, 07:23:01 UTC

This story is one of the hottest fan fics ever IMO.

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 12:30:00 UTC

O_O *blinks* Really?! *blushes despite herself* Now, I am really glad you are liking it... and comments like that totally make me want to write even more of it!

mildly_neurotic October 29 2006, 16:44:07 UTC

Yes, seriously. The dynamic is interesting. Somehow you've managed to make their mutual attraction to Johnny not interfer with Bam & Dunn's growing relationship. The fact they are in love, but both into him and cool with it is just smoking. OK so I'm a perv at heart I guess. I like the twist.

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 23:36:43 UTC

Sounds like someone has a thing for poly relationships...

Which is awesome!

Thread 5

jycaegima October 29 2006, 07:26:06 UTC

My heart went all pitty-pat when I saw there was a new part posted.

Thank you for writing the panic attack. I watched that skit so closely because I really couldn't believe that Bam was leaning on that wall, just watching. This reaction is totally believable. A phobia that severe does not usually allow for that close of a proximity. My mom is the same way about snakes and she can get panicky just from seeing a too detailed picture. Plus a panic attack on top of an infection. Yikes!

I love how Ryan takes care of Bam. Plus Knoxville being the pillar again is great. :)

That kiss was written so very well.

Bam's paranoia about the prescriptions was cute--probably justified, but cute.

Oh God, the butt kite. I cannot wait for this DVD. Thank you for reminding me.

I can't wait for the next installment.

trollsttroll October 29 2006, 12:38:37 UTC

Hee! I made your heart go pitty-pat! *dance dance*

Dude, the second time I saw Jackass 2, I watched Bam (and company, but mostly Bam) very closely. During the puppet show skit even, you can see him trying to get behind people to get away from the snake hanging out of the glory hole.

Nother thing I noticed... and I'm not sure if is just an over active imagination or seeing things the way I want to see it... but I swear during some of the more seually over skits, Dunn wold have his hands cupped over his crotch or be rubbing his crotch... then I noticed Bam do it a couple times... and it reminded me of a skit from Jackass volume 1 where Bam gets confronted about sporting a hard on and getting off by tormenting people with a skunk corpse on a remote control car. It made me thing about the pranks they pull... and them getting off on it.

That kiss was written so very well.You don't know how big of a compliment that is to me! I have such a hard time writing kisses that way... because that's not how I've ever experienced them. Also ( ... )