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Culmination

Oct 23, 2006 06:13

Title: Culmination
Chapter: 2
Fandom: Jackass/Viva La Bam
Rating: Very NC-17
Pairing: Bam/Ryan/Johnny
Warning: Spoilers for Viva La Bam’s Fort Knoxville, Jackass 1 & 2...
Disclaimer: It’s fiction. Learn it, live it... love it.
Word Count: 2197
Summary: A follow-up to the branding incident...

Chapter 1

( You've spent months thinking about... This. Exact. Moment... )

dunn, bam, jackass, knoxville, fic, vlb, nc-17

Comments 26

coffeewordangel October 23 2006, 17:46:13 UTC

Jesus fuck. I'm halfway through reading both parts (and I don't know how I missed the first one, wtf?) and I'm hearing all three voices in my head. Now, the Bam and Ryan ones are pretty normal for me to hear if someone's got the characterization down but Johnny? Not so much. So for me to hear his voice in my head while reading his lines? Your characterization is spot on. Thank you.

This is hot as hell and I adore you for writing it. Even if the white on black is making me see spots. *g*

trollsttroll October 23 2006, 18:33:15 UTC

Now, the Bam and Ryan ones are pretty normal for me to hear if someone's got the characterization down but Johnny? Not so much. So for me to hear his voice in my head while reading his lines? Your characterization is spot on. Thank you.

YES! *triumphant jump in the air followed by some insane bouncing* Especially from you!! (I have you on my rec list... omg.)

And this is so great to be told my characterizations are spot on... Helps that I've been drowning myself in Jackass, Viva La Bam, and Haggard though!!! And reading hella amounts of fic...

Hope the font isn't too aweful. I can concentrate on it better than black on white. Strange, eh?

*bounces happily again*

ihugrandomly October 23 2006, 20:20:57 UTC

love it love it love it love it.

mhmmm.
good choice of peoples.

trollsttroll October 23 2006, 20:35:54 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you thought so!

Thanks for reading and commentign!!!

Frigging brilliant. anonymous October 23 2006, 21:40:54 UTC

He fucking laughs when he gets off…

That is seriously completely perfect. I can totally imagine Johnny doing that, too. XD Can't wait for more!

Re: Frigging brilliant. trollsttroll October 23 2006, 22:23:10 UTC

I could totally imagine it too! During a Wildboyz episode in Russia... he was 'wrestled' by a woman... and even though he was being crunched in half and asking her what she was doing later that night and commenting about it turning him on... he was still giggling!!!

:D

Thanks for reading!

Re: Frigging brilliant. anonymous October 27 2006, 05:03:06 UTC

Always a pleasure!

sirius_faith October 23 2006, 23:23:54 UTC

Hot damn! I'm so happy you got this up so fast! There's going to be more, right? With all three of them? 'Cause I'm in love with your Johnny.

He fucking laughs when he gets off…

That was like the hottest thing ever. So amazing. I think you've got yourself a dedicated fangirl here. ^_^

trollsttroll October 24 2006, 04:33:00 UTC

I was actually shocked at how fast the next chapter worked itself out!

Yes, there is going to be more!!!

And the bit about Johnny laughing when he gets off... just was so damn perfect.

*yay for dedicated fangirl*

jycaegima October 24 2006, 06:44:19 UTC

I'm so glad you decided to continue this story. Once again if only for the lack of threesomes! :) I do very much enjoy your characterizations, especially of Knoxville. He always seems the strangest dichotomy; he is loud, brash, and certifiable, but he is a pillar that the guys seem to lean on. So I really like the fact that you give him a certain stillness or certainty when you describe him.

Servility upon the face of the fucking brat prince of West Chester…
That literally might be the best line ever. I also love how the tone turned on a dime. First it was playful, then serene, then lusty, then slightly malevolent; more often it was a mixture of all, and it takes a lot of talent to set the scene so precisely and yet make it so very flexible.

I LOVE laughing during sex. It is literally in my top three happy things. So thank you for having it and also allowing it to seem a bit twisted.

trollsttroll October 24 2006, 09:40:46 UTC

I adore your description of Johnny! Because it is totally how I see him. Crazy but this huge figure in the group... I can't even paraphrase what you stated. You said it perfectly!

Servility upon the face of the fucking brat prince of West Chester... Man, I was so worried about that line. I must have deleted it only to add it back in like three times. I wasn't sure if it fell in with the characterizations.

I wasn't sure how people would react to Johnny's laughing... but I couldn't leave it out... sure, it's twisted... but it is so right!

Thanks for your wonderful comments and for reading my fic!