I loved the whole chapter, but the end when Addie said 'You dirty, dirty man'. Genious! Your writing is really amazing, this is one of the best fictions I've read. So looking forward to the next part!
Great writing. I like the idea of this fanfiction so far. They are just talking and then the the thoughts of them are just great. I love that it is very in character, I belive that it could really happen between both.
I hope that he tells her at the end why he stoop her up. I like your Pete much more than the PP Pete :)^^
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Your writing is really amazing, this is one of the best fictions I've read.
So looking forward to the next part!
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I already have all the chapters, but I don't want to spam the friendslist or the fanfic community, so I'm trying to post every two days or so :D
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I love that it is very in character, I belive that it could really happen between both.
I hope that he tells her at the end why he stoop her up.
I like your Pete much more than the PP Pete :)^^
Looking forward the next chapter :)
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I'm glad you thought they were in character :)
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