Elephants, Chapter 6

[troatie]

Comments

[kizzykarla]

This just gets better & better!
I love Addie & Pete's banter & the way they now seem really relaxed talking about all their problems.
Their made for each other, hopefully they will admit it soon. Looking forward to more. x

[troatie]

Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :)They'll admit it eventually, don't worry :P

[xyliette]

Wonderful. Loved Addison's recount of her arrival and subsequent demise. Pete's dating...can't wait for more. :)

[troatie]

Thanks so much for reading! Glad you liked it :)

[beps_wildorchid]

This fic is really, really fantastic. I love how beautifully you've written the fic and the small moments that are so beautifully tragic in a minute sense-- the parts where they are both thinking the same thing but unaware that the other is as well.

[troatie]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :) And I'm really glad you didn't think those moments were too cheesy, I was kinda worried about that when I wrote it :P

[beps_wildorchid]

No, not at all. I thought it worked quite well :)