Calling You [2/?]

Feb 23, 2008 21:21

Title: Calling You
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Ship(s): Addison/Mark, implied Addison/Derek, mentions of others.
Rating: M (NC-17? I suck at ratings)
Disclaimer: I don't know Addison, Derek, Mark or any other characters. I wish I did.
Series Summaries: Derek's been gone for three weeks, and Mark's still there for Addison. Mark and Addison's relationship ( Read more... )

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hopelessly_lazy February 23 2008, 20:55:47 UTC
Being a crappy reviewer because I'm in the middle of two essays, but this was an amazing break for me. Loved it. Oh, and loved the mantra of "It's just sex"

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troatie February 24 2008, 21:22:23 UTC
Thank you! Glad it was a nice break from the essays :)

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teelke February 23 2008, 23:01:11 UTC
*sigh*

This was hot :) I just read this before going to bed and I loved it ( again) I have no idea what to say to this.
Oh I know ( I have a big finish :D )

I loooved that she choose his aftershave and can´t resist it now :)

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troatie February 24 2008, 21:23:47 UTC
Thanks!

I'm glad you thought it was hot, I always hate my sex scenes :P And I'm happy to hear you liked the aftershave thing :D

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xyliette February 23 2008, 23:13:30 UTC
Freaking fantastic job you! I enjoy that you addressed that she is out of Derek's family and what she's got left is Savvy, cause in the end that's what she's got but she doesn't realize that all Mark's got is her.

This was just an amazing comparison, "Because it can’t be good for her to keep having sex with him, and it’s certainly not good for him to keep pretending he’s just having sex with her."

Can't wait for more! Thank you.

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troatie February 24 2008, 21:25:47 UTC
Thank you!

I love the Addie/Savvy friendship, and I hated the way she kind of forgot about her in the show. And she was definitely all Mark had, because as far as we know he doesn't really have a family apart from Derek's.

Thanks again for reviewing &hearts

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escapismrocks February 23 2008, 23:43:25 UTC
Personally I loved the “Because every time I stop avoiding you, we make mistakes. Naked mistakes. And that can’t happen anymore. No more mistakes.” Becaiuse yet again its another totally in character line that feels like it came right from the show. Denial it aint just a river in Egypt.

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troatie February 24 2008, 21:27:10 UTC
Thank you!

It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside when you say she's in character, because... well, I love her and I worry about not doing her justice :)

Denial is a freakin' ocean.

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lovelinz February 24 2008, 00:53:28 UTC
Once again, 'Oh, Addison. *pats her on the head*'

This poor, delusioned woman. I can't wait to see her actually admit that it's not just sex/a series of naked mistakes.

And poor Mark too.

But, still, I adore it.

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troatie February 24 2008, 21:28:07 UTC
She does deserve some head-patting, doesn't she?

And she will admit it, eventually... I think :P

Thank you &hearts

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