Oh man, I feel like a kid in a candy store with all the Hobbs/Raydor goodness that you've been writing! :D :D :D
1) I love the sexy, mature feel of this. Both women aren't afraid to admit that they want each other, their seduction game is sexy and honest and unapologetic and I LOVE it.
The captain decides it’s time for a less subtle approach. Leaning forwards, she places her hand several inches above the blonde’s knee, moves her face tantalisingly close to her ear and whispers.
“Go ahead, tease me. I don’t mind.”
Oh God, I think I just died at that line. Superb!
2) I *love* this. It's adorable and domestic, but it's still grounded in the realism of their world. This made me chuckle:
Sharon thinks the term ‘cook’ should be applied loosely. What the blonde has really done is made a mess of her kitchen. There’s flour all over her bench, ingredients laying precariously close to the edge and balsamic vinegar running in rivers down the younger woman’s arms. Sharon takes pity on her.LOLOLOLOL!!! And I can just see Sharon being
( ... )
I really want to do a longer fic that actually portrays Sharon as submissive in bed. There's evidence that those with tough jobs, or in positions of power actually prefer to be dominated in bed - it could be an interesting concept to explore. Urg, but aren't ACTUAL pillow princesses the worst? So annoying.
Thank you so much for all your support! It used to be that I would log on to my email and see that someone had reviewed and I would freak out in fear that it was another bully - but not anymore!
I really want to do a longer fic that actually portrays Sharon as submissive in bed.
Oooooh! I want to read that. Like, right now. :D :D :D
Urg, but aren't ACTUAL pillow princesses the worst? So annoying.
ROFL. I will comment on that in private. :P ;)
It used to be that I would log on to my email and see that someone had reviewed and I would freak out in fear that it was another bully - but not anymore!
If anyone gives you any trouble, you just let a mod, or even myself know. This is a zero-tollerance for bullying zone. :) I can promise you that you'll have a bunch of support if anyone ever dared to be a jerk. :)
Argh. I wanted to reply to this but I was busy at a bar getting a little tipsy with my mother (don't judge, free drinks man). You can't read it riiiiight now, but I might write it tomorrow. Haha yes, I did get your email ;p I reckon LJ is easier for weeding out the bullies than it is on ff.net or Tumblr.
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1) I love the sexy, mature feel of this. Both women aren't afraid to admit that they want each other, their seduction game is sexy and honest and unapologetic and I LOVE it.
The captain decides it’s time for a less subtle approach. Leaning forwards, she places her hand several inches above the blonde’s knee, moves her face tantalisingly close to her ear and whispers.
“Go ahead, tease me. I don’t mind.”
Oh God, I think I just died at that line. Superb!
2) I *love* this. It's adorable and domestic, but it's still grounded in the realism of their world. This made me chuckle:
Sharon thinks the term ‘cook’ should be applied loosely. What the blonde has really done is made a mess of her kitchen. There’s flour all over her bench, ingredients laying precariously close to the edge and balsamic vinegar running in rivers down the younger woman’s arms. Sharon takes pity on her.LOLOLOLOL!!! And I can just see Sharon being ( ... )
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I really want to do a longer fic that actually portrays Sharon as submissive in bed. There's evidence that those with tough jobs, or in positions of power actually prefer to be dominated in bed - it could be an interesting concept to explore. Urg, but aren't ACTUAL pillow princesses the worst? So annoying.
Thank you so much for all your support! It used to be that I would log on to my email and see that someone had reviewed and I would freak out in fear that it was another bully - but not anymore!
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Oooooh! I want to read that. Like, right now. :D :D :D
Urg, but aren't ACTUAL pillow princesses the worst? So annoying.
ROFL. I will comment on that in private. :P ;)
It used to be that I would log on to my email and see that someone had reviewed and I would freak out in fear that it was another bully - but not anymore!
If anyone gives you any trouble, you just let a mod, or even myself know. This is a zero-tollerance for bullying zone. :) I can promise you that you'll have a bunch of support if anyone ever dared to be a jerk. :)
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You can't read it riiiiight now, but I might write it tomorrow.
Haha yes, I did get your email ;p
I reckon LJ is easier for weeding out the bullies than it is on ff.net or Tumblr.
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