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seventh time's the charm

Dec 16, 2008 14:52

[09.24.2008]

Title: Seventh Time’s the Charm
Pairing: Ryo x Shige x Yamapi
Word Count: 3100+
Rating: R
Notes: For misticloud as part of the nana fic exchange, in response to her prompt: Nishikatopi; seventh time’s the charm.
Summary: It takes seven moments for them to finally get it all right.

( Yamapi doesn’t know what he thinks, and on the night Ryo confronts him, Yamapi takes Ryo extra hard and his fingers dig into Ryo’s arms, sides, thighs, deeper than they ever have. It’s rougher than it’s been in a while, desperately searching for something that Ryo doesn’t think is there. )

c: yamapi, g: news, c: ryo, g: kanjani8, c: shige, p: ryo x shige x yamapi

Comments 4

sanjihan February 7 2009, 18:29:36 UTC

I'm not sure if I commented on this before but I just read it again and realized how much I adored it. I bet Gem thought this was BETTER than her prompt, hehe. This fic is just full of awesomeness and great/awkward moments and you know...I am almost ready to make this my OTP...or something. LOL. Anyhow, best line: Because Ryo always wins, it hits Shige squarely in the face.

trivialaffair February 8 2009, 02:38:28 UTC

aww thank you :D hahaha her prompt was SO hard, i'm happy i managed to do something with it. thank you for reading! and i love shige fail XDDDD

bachiari May 5 2009, 04:42:08 UTC

WHAT. HOW COME THERE IS ONLY ONE COMMENT. AM I SEEING THINGS?
THIS WAS SO WONDERFUL
I LOVED IT SO MUCH ♥
will review better when im more coherent XD

trivialaffair May 5 2009, 07:07:52 UTC

Hahaha this was originally posted in my LJ before I moved it here. I had some comments then, but yay for being the first comment in the comm :D