Title: Balloon
Length: oneshot (1287 words)
Author:
miduyoh (before:
jadexscandal)
Pairing: Doojoon/Hyunseung
Rating: PG
Themes: Fluff
Disclaimer: Don't own anything.
Summary: Where will it take me?
A/N: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY LOVELY
jesape , first time writing a BEAST fic ^^"... I know it's late ;-; but I did my best ♥
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The red balloon Hyunseung was chasing swayed over them, climbing up higher and higher. )
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Thanks for reading dear <3!!
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this was amazing btw,and rofl seung was awesomely cute :x<33
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The beginning is sad, poor Hyun-baby T_T
I like the way you're using to describe the fly of the balloon ^^ I wanted grab it too, so much !!! xD
Hyunseung 's meeting with Doojoon was cute, and it marked an evolution in his life *o* (Well because you made an ellipsis).
The second time that the balloon appears I was "OMO ! Will he be there ?", I was disappointed as Hyunseung when I found that he wasn't xD
But it's better ! :D Love the end ♥
Really sweet. I'm happy to read some DooSeung, because I love this paring too much T_T
THANK YOU (:
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GAH I'm sorry for commenting a lil bit late, just stumbled upon it and read it~
it's cuuuuuuuteeeeeeeee~
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Omg, this is the sweetest fic I've ever ready of Dooseng x]]
hank you for write it. :) <3
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