[one shot] Balloon

Apr 27, 2010 22:07

Title: Balloon
Length: oneshot (1287 words)
Author: miduyoh   (before: jadexscandal
Pairing: Doojoon/Hyunseung
Rating: PG
Themes: Fluff
Disclaimer: Don't own anything.
Summary: Where will it take me?
A/N: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY LOVELY jesape , first time writing a BEAST fic ^^"... I know it's late ;-; but I did my best ♥

The red balloon Hyunseung was chasing swayed over them, climbing up higher and higher. )

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ttaejoong_hyuk April 29 2010, 03:50:48 UTC
OOOH MY GOSH THIS IS SO CUTE!!!!! goshers it's soooo cute and i love to itty bitty pieces and ajklgah the balloon and doojoon...oh goshers him as a kid ajdhlgak KYA! and hyunseung and they never forgot and adjfhgalk love at first sight ajgjadhla I LOVE IT!!!!!

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miduyoh April 29 2010, 06:25:26 UTC
*squeeeeeeeeeee* THANK YOU 8D your comments made me uehfdyuwehdnu!~~

Thanks for reading dear <3!!

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ialways_am April 29 2010, 13:12:02 UTC
the red ballon reminds me of donbang :) hehe. But my fav pairing would be junseob in B2ST, baby! XD

this was amazing btw,and rofl seung was awesomely cute :x<33

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maumseogae May 27 2010, 09:22:15 UTC
sdubfrzyv ! this is so cute, sweet ♥
The beginning is sad, poor Hyun-baby T_T
I like the way you're using to describe the fly of the balloon ^^ I wanted grab it too, so much !!! xD
Hyunseung 's meeting with Doojoon was cute, and it marked an evolution in his life *o* (Well because you made an ellipsis).
The second time that the balloon appears I was "OMO ! Will he be there ?", I was disappointed as Hyunseung when I found that he wasn't xD
But it's better ! :D Love the end ♥
Really sweet. I'm happy to read some DooSeung, because I love this paring too much T_T
THANK YOU (:

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vanissa717 June 20 2010, 15:50:17 UTC
THIS IS THE BEST DOOSEUNG FIC EVER!
GAH I'm sorry for commenting a lil bit late, just stumbled upon it and read it~
it's cuuuuuuuteeeeeeeee~

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huskyvoice October 18 2010, 04:34:10 UTC
DOOSEUNG JANG >.<
Omg, this is the sweetest fic I've ever ready of Dooseng x]]
hank you for write it. :) <3

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