[one shot] One person

Nov 09, 2009 08:34


Title: One person
Length: one shot (1192 words)
Author: Read more... )

rating: pg, status: completed, pairing: minsu, fic: one shot

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justynapoland November 9 2009, 20:12:29 UTC
Adorable :D MinSu is my OTP :D
Though I found a tiny mistake Along the way Junsu was constantly talking, about nothing in particular. - that's how it should be. There were also some commas missing, but in general it was very well-written :)

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weerainbow November 9 2009, 23:51:00 UTC
*hands you a gold star*
This is exactly what I needed...some cute fluffy MinSu!!! I've honestly been waiting for someone to write it, and then you did so hurray for you!!
Changmin being in awe of Junsu is always nice and this just makes it perfect :o) I love the cute innocence of it but how his heart still jumps
*claps*
And this line:
The two little boys hugged for the longest time, sobbing and sniffing quietly."
...made me "awwwwww" out loud *grins*
<33333

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musik_love November 10 2009, 03:53:44 UTC
awww so sweet, minsu isnt the couple that i like the most but this is so adorable!!!

they must have looked cute when they were small~

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snowyhana November 13 2009, 14:05:48 UTC
gyaaah!! XD this is so cute~ X'DDD

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engraved_16 November 17 2009, 07:46:14 UTC
omg just thinking of elementary minsu is so cuute
:DDDDDDDDDDDD
&hearts

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