The Anonymous Writing Feedback Meme

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THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Since it’s been more than half a year since the last one.

Let’s keep this simple. As a writer, do you want to know what readers really think of your writing?

THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Comments

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Sometimes the plot seems a bit bland though you're technically spot on.

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You're the only author I've read who actually uses deadpan humor successfully. I appreciate the care with which you characterize your protagonists. You keep the cast members real without glorifying them, and you're not afraid to allow them unsympathetic actions and philosophies. Your writing is bold and smart, and you deserve more comments.

You don't know me, BTW.

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Your characterisation is invariably spot on, and somehow realistic.

Your writing could probably use a little polishing, like, structurally and grammatically, but it doesn't take away from the reading experience as it is.

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I do adore your writing, you always amaze me, but sometimes the plots (and I'm talking SP fics here) seem a bit OOC.

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i feel like the plot is buried under the beautiful language, unique humor and perfect characterization. maybe you should try "less is more" approach some time?