You have a really good sense of character and how to express emotion. Sometimes it feels, though, like you get so caught up with a particular idea you don't take the time to expand it, put it in context, and make it make sense to everyone else. It makes your fic dense and hard to read and connect to, sometimes. It's like, there's something brilliant in there; the moment I figure out what the hell it is, I'll love it.
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