You have the greatest AUs in just about ever, but sometimes your spelling/grammar/etc is a little messy. I think you just need a nice beta to doublecheck everything ;D
Great ideas. Great emotions. Can really feel every thought and action that's happening. Fantastic and CREATIVE AU's Icarus Walks -nudgenudge- that really pull you in and make you BELIEVE with the amazing characterization.
Minor typos that don't really detract from overall flow of the story, but it would help to get it checked over. Hardly noticeable (cause you get sucked into the plot) until the 3rd or 4th read.
I can't use enough synonyms for "AWESOME", so just write more.
so i left fandom for a bit and haven't had a chance to catch up on all the stuff i missed fanfic-wise quite yet. seeing you on this meme reminded me of your fics, so i checked the ones i had mem'd and, at least based on the comments i left in the past, i think you're an amazing writer!
lol, you'll be able to figure out who this is soon, probably, because right after this i am going to go catch myself up on your fics! i'll leave more (non-anon) comments for you there~ :)
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also I'm totally bad at this anonymous thing D: ♥
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Minor typos that don't really detract from overall flow of the story, but it would help to get it checked over. Hardly noticeable (cause you get sucked into the plot) until the 3rd or 4th read.
I can't use enough synonyms for "AWESOME", so just write more.
And don't ever stop ;___;
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lol, you'll be able to figure out who this is soon, probably, because right after this i am going to go catch myself up on your fics! i'll leave more (non-anon) comments for you there~ :)
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