Fic: The Monsters Inside (Natasha, Bruce, PG-13)

[tristesses]

Title: The Monsters Inside
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Natasha, Bruce
Summary: Natasha is at the wrong place at the wrong time, and her entire life shatters. (A Natasha-as-Hulk AU.)
Word Count: 6347
Author's Notes: This is slightly edited from the version I submitted to avengersfest, thanks to some con-crit I received after the fic was posted there.

Comments

[kith_koby]

This was brilliant. It stars off perfectly normal, Natasha just being Natasha (I really enjoyed the interaction she had with Bruce and Betty, though), and suddenly erupts. But we don't see the eruption, and that's what makes it so powerful that immediately afterwards, Natasha is still Natasha. Utterly professional, acts as though everything is normal, and makes her getaway with no one the wiser, for very good reasons

[iteari]

Very creative. I appreciate how unafraid you were of making Natasha as Hulk as possible in her transformation. Would she be as big and bulky as Bruce is when he goes green, I wonder...

Anyway, totally loved this!

[tristesses]

Thank you!

[azephirin]

This is wonderful! I really enjoyed how you characterized both Natasha and the Other Woman.

[tristesses]

Thank you! ♥