Comments | tristesses: Fic: Hourglass (Chapel/Uhura, NC-17)

tristesses

Fic: Hourglass (Chapel/Uhura, NC-17)

Jun 11, 2010 16:17

Title: Hourglass
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Chapel/Uhura
Word Count: ~2400
Prompt: "Breathplay" at

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ship: chapel/uhura, challenge: kink bingo, !fic, genre: smut, character: nyota uhura, fandom: star trek, character: christine chapel, *femslash

Comments 10

iteari June 12 2010, 03:09:13 UTC

Love the way you described Uhura looking in her corset. The only thing better than that is to actually have an actual image of it! ;)

I really like your Chapel, your interpretation is so fun to read and get a little hot over.

Kirk snickers, as does Gaila, and McCoy rolls his eyes and bids them both goodbye, in the sort of voice that drips disdain all over Kirk and Gaila's innuendo-filled antics.

This had me really smiling. I don't know why but somehow the idea of Gaila and Kirk's bromance exasperation everyone really gives me the giggles.

The last paragraph out of this whole story really makes me melt.

asimaiyat June 12 2010, 05:27:42 UTC

I love the idea of Kirk and Gaila having a "bromance"! :D

iteari June 12 2010, 05:52:04 UTC

I love the idea of the antics they'd probably get into!

iteari June 12 2010, 05:52:41 UTC

Crap. I meant "exasperating" not "exasperation."

Thread 5

igrockspock June 12 2010, 03:19:44 UTC

I love the way you write erotic fic. Truly. Sometimes I scroll past your posts by accident because I think, "no, I am definitely not into that," but then I see you've written it, and I always come back because you will write it in a way that makes me understand why someone would be into that. You do that by treating your characters with such attention and respect. I feel like I really know who Chapel and Uhura are, most especially Uhura. She's a hard character for me to wrap my head around sometimes, but the way you write her makes her so real and human but still the woman we see in canon. Thank you for this.

tristesses June 13 2010, 03:28:54 UTC

Thank you. This is a really encouraging review; you're one of the authors I most respect in the fandom, and to hear you say this about my writing is really...well, awesome.

illariy June 12 2010, 19:08:46 UTC

Hot! I love how you characterised them through their kinky preferences and their approaches to the topic. Lovely as always. Thank you for sharing!

tristesses June 13 2010, 03:29:06 UTC

You are quite welcome, and I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

rubynye July 6 2010, 11:35:49 UTC

igrockspock recced this and, oh, it's breathtaking. Your every story is a home run! I am astonished.