Fic: Lament (Sarek/Spock Prime, R)

[tristesses]

Title: Lament
Rating: R
Pairing: Sarek/Spock Prime
Word Count: 577
Prompt: For this prompt at st_xi_kink_meme
Warnings: Quasi-incest (warning policy in profile)
Kinks: See pairing. Also, angst. Bucketloads of it.
Summary: Fact: Sarek will never be able to construct a logical reason for this, nor does he particularly want to.
Disclaimer: All recognizable

Comments

[noein9]

OH NO YOU DIDN'T.

NO YOU DID NOT JUST WRITE WHAT I THOUGHT I READ.

*boggles*

[tristesses]

Oh, but I did. I so did.

I'm hoping you enjoyed it!

[azephirin]

Wow, this is fascinating and incredibly messed-up. Well done!

[tristesses]

Thanks!

[illariy]

Wow. The desperate craving and sex feel very alien in their intensity indeed. That's so fitting to this pairing and I love what you did with it.

P.S.: Your prompt link just leads back to this entry.

[tristesses]

So it does. Thanks for catching that.

I am very glad you enjoyed the fic!

[mizzykitty]

Wow. That was beautifully written. Powerful and intense. I love the view of Spock Prime through Sarek's eyes, his comparisons between his son and this, his not-son.

While Sarek can look past the faint resemblance this Spock has to his true son, he is well aware that this older man sees only the skull of his own father in Sarek's face.

This totally gave me the shivers!

I love how they each have something the other wants, and it's entirely believable how, in their grief and desperation, they could become addicted to those things despite how wrong it is.

Well done!!

[tristesses]

I have the idea that Vulcans feel grief and pain as strongly or more than humans, and it was fun toying with how that would play out in a fic. Especially with this pairing! It's so absolutely screwed-up. I'm really glad you liked the fic, thanks!

[syredronning]

Woah woah, intense and a believable exchange for memories;
Sarek's paternal love versus Amanda at old age. This makes total sense!

[tristesses]

Thank you! I'm glad their logic works out well. :D