Comments | tristesses: Fic: Bit and Bridle (Spock/Kirk, NC-17)

tristesses

Fic: Bit and Bridle (Spock/Kirk, NC-17)

Jun 27, 2009 14:05

Title: Bit and Bridle
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairing: Spock/Kirk
Prompt: "Animal play" at kink_bingo/kink_bingo on DW
Word Count: 4921
Warnings: Restraints, toys, pony play
Summary: "I ask of you, Admiral, for permission to instigate unorthodox disciplinary measures as well as the authority to enforce them for the safety of ship and crew." Or, in which ( Read more... )

challenge: kink bingo, genre: smut, fandom: star trek, *slash, !fic

Comments 35

almightychrissy June 27 2009, 23:20:31 UTC

Cue the wavy hands and squeaky noises.

Animal play is sooo not my kink but this was REALLY HOT. I love your characterization of both of them, their need, Kirk's reactions (because indeed it is some motherfuckingfucking shit), just everything. Awesome.

tristesses June 29 2009, 06:19:33 UTC

It's never been my kink, either, but after writing this I'm a lot more open to the idea. ;D I'm glad you liked it!

garryowen June 28 2009, 00:30:12 UTC

Re: so much to love! tristesses June 29 2009, 06:20:42 UTC

Funnily enough, animal play's always been a squick of mine...but not so much anymore. XD Thanks for the compliments, I'm glad you liked it!

Running commentary, GO! alder_knight June 28 2009, 05:09:27 UTC

"Your friend McCoy once likened you to a stallion. I am prepared to break you like one."

Cue first jizz-in-my-pants moment.

...OH MY GOD RIDING CROP AUGH

AND THEN HE GOES BACK FUCK OH GOD

Ohhhh it makes so much sense. He's so young and inexperienced to be thrown into so much power and responsibility, especially since he's lived up until Starfleet with that sort of roguish rebellion as his ticket to getting what he wants and needs. This is, like, a textbook situation for getting off on submission. Oh good lord.

I didn't think I liked pony play.

I'll be in my bunk, FOREVER.

Re: Running commentary, GO! tristesses June 29 2009, 06:21:45 UTC

Exactly! Kirk needs to lose control every now and then, and who better to do so than the master of self-control, eh? Thanks for the awesome review!

andreth47 June 29 2009, 00:30:54 UTC

Fabulous! All I can do is echo what others have said: not my kink, but you made it my kink! Your Spock voice is pitch-perfect.

tristesses June 29 2009, 06:22:14 UTC

Thanks! Love that icon, by the way.

rhaegal June 29 2009, 08:56:45 UTC

I thought I was going to be so very squicked by this, but I was brave and wow, I'm glad I gave it a go. I love that Spock knew exactly how to get Kirk to strip, and Spock's loss of control at the end was just delicious. Guh.

tristesses June 29 2009, 22:11:41 UTC

:D Thank you! And I love your icon. I used to get so emotional whenever I watched that movie.

rhaegal June 29 2009, 22:16:11 UTC

Hee, so did I! Yes, used to...*shifty eyes*