Comments | trishpawachunyu: the dream we used to have involving you and me/why is it not the same in our reality?

trishpawachunyu

the dream we used to have involving you and me/why is it not the same in our reality?

Apr 24, 2010 17:36

Title: magnet
Characters/Pairings: Russia/America, past UK/US if you want it to be.
Rating: PG13, to be safe
Genre: Romance...?
Warning: My immense love for Vocaloids, apparently. Spoilers for the_chosen_end and pyrrhiccomedy for putting it up! ^_^
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~ star-spangled heroes, // draw a circle and see earth, the chosen end, ~ water-pipe soviet bear, @ written versions of thine imagination, ~ god save his eyebrows

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trishpawachunyu April 24 2010, 11:45:44 UTC

Oh really? >.> I'm pleased you think it's beautiful!/flails I've been thinking of the magnet metaphor for them and really wanted to use them for the longest time now...but it's still short. I guess it's 'cause when you want to give a tribute to awesomeness you run out of words...? =_=; Thanks for reading!

wizzard890 April 25 2010, 09:24:46 UTC

Oh, this is lovely! It's so flattering that you enjoy TCE enough to write fic for it!

The idea of the magnets is so appropriate when it comes to these two, isn't it? They're just as likely to repel one another as they are to snap together. And it's so funny, you have the centuries going by in the blink of an eye; I'm sure that's exactly how both of them feel sometimes. So much has transpired between them, but looking back on it, only a few of the most important moments stick in their minds.

Also, this: "His words finally agreed with his heart, fifty years too late." Killed me. Oh, Russia. Always last to the party.

♥

*flails about happily* trishpawachunyu April 25 2010, 10:23:10 UTC

Squee~! Thanks! I thought you wouldn't like it, 'cause this was, after all, the culmination of about two hours of keyboard dumps. ^^; That's 'cause I wanted it done, so you can see it, because it's somewhat my gift to both of you ^_^ I was supposed you write you a fic over at care package but I never got to it, and when I saw Russia say those three little words I thought "just do it!" ^_^ I'm sorry to bother you with my rambling, though. My dad says I do that when I'm really happy, and I guess I am. ^^ PS: That last line made me cry and smile all at once when I typed it in.

pyrrhiccomedy April 26 2010, 17:17:40 UTC

This is really lovely! I'll add it to the Index right away, if that's all right. =D

just imagine that I was UK, and I was releasing my hyperness by punching France. trishpawachunyu April 26 2010, 17:38:15 UTC

Please, go ahead! It would be an honor! ^_^ Now that I've gotten feedback from my two favorite authors, maybe one of my goals in life is now fulfilled? >_