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Fic: Surprise Party

Jan 17, 2012 18:02

Title: Surprise Party
Author: triquetralmoon
Rating: R
Genre: Gen, H/C (beginnings of sick!Dean)
Warnings: Post-Lazarus Rising, nothing else you really need to worry about
Word Count: ~1700

Note: This is the first thing I've written since right after the first episode of season six. Be gentle. This may have a follow up if I can hack it, but no promises.

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sick!dean, one-shot, cold/flu/nebulous illness not yet writte

Comments 18

wave_obscura January 17 2012, 23:21:07 UTC

Like I told you, I am SO EFFING HAPPY that you wrote something. And this is so delightful. I love slice-of-life fics and this one is really heartbreaking in it's simplicity-- after everything, EVERYTHING-- Sam and Dean are still Sam and Dean, aren't they? It's just really lovely.

But I need to hear more about Dean's illness. TELL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

triquetralmoon January 17 2012, 23:34:43 UTC

Thank you, chiquita. <3

I told you - talking to you inspires me. I literally wouldn't/couldn't have done this without you.

So keep talking to me and maybe I'll be able to do part 2!

borgmama1of5 January 17 2012, 23:23:08 UTC

I liked the atmospehre in this--the unspoken brotherliness, and all the details around them.

triquetralmoon January 17 2012, 23:36:52 UTC

Thank you so much. That's definitely what I was going for - that they were just there for each other, and cared, but not in an a way that had to be said or was hugely overt.

roque_clasique January 17 2012, 23:38:34 UTC

Oh, this is so wonderful and sweet and quietly hopeful. Just what I needed!

triquetralmoon January 18 2012, 00:26:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm happy you found it uplifting.

taylorariel January 18 2012, 00:25:01 UTC

Very nice. I could feel the atmosphere in every aspect of the story. Wouldn't mind a follow-up with some SickDean and Comfort Sam :)
Thank You.

triquetralmoon January 18 2012, 00:27:54 UTC

I'm so glad you could feel the atmosphere! So often and I end up clinging to inner dialogue and outer dialogue and not much else. So thank youuu.

I'm trying for a part two. We'll see how it goes!

maypoles January 18 2012, 03:01:15 UTC

Yay, new fic from you! <333

I love the atmosphere you've created here, and how much the fact that they really LIKE each other shines through.

triquetralmoon January 18 2012, 08:12:55 UTC

<333 Hahah! Yeah, I genuinely didn't think it would ever happen. My muse was crushed under a tree in the forest or something. It may be limping its way back.

Thank you!

maypoles January 18 2012, 15:04:23 UTC

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