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Fic: The Ache

Sep 28, 2010 08:30

Title: The Ache
Authors: triquetralmoon and wave_obscura
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Gen, H/C
Warnings: This is the premiere episode of the sixth season. Don't read if you aren't caught up. Also - swearing.
Word Count: ~2300

Summary: Missing scene from 6.01. hurt!sick!Dean This will probably be Kripke'd immediately, but - it gets inside Sam's head.

Author's note: This was written as a ( Read more... )

hurt!sick!dean, h/c, fic, sam needs dean, round robin

Comments 41

dr_ducktator September 28 2010, 12:52:18 UTC

So good! Dean is so not a Campbell. Good call :)

triquetralmoon September 28 2010, 13:11:25 UTC

Yes, he was for sure raised by John Winchester!

Thank you for reading!

pixymisa September 28 2010, 13:08:22 UTC

Aww, this is adorable! I love how protective and possessive Sammy is of Dean, how sure he is that he's going drag Dean back in. I would have loved to see this scene play out in the premier! :D

triquetralmoon September 28 2010, 13:14:30 UTC

Sammy needs he goddamn brother. End of story. :D

Thanks so much for reading!

ariadnes_string September 28 2010, 13:23:13 UTC

Oh, I love this! I like how wary Sam is of the Campbells--guess I really wanted to see that!

triquetralmoon September 28 2010, 13:37:03 UTC

Campbells are "family" Sam fell into, the only the he has right now - and he has to stick with Samuel (in theory) to find out who brought him back. But Dean is FAMILY. He'll always come first.

Thank you for reading!

ursalita September 28 2010, 13:23:28 UTC

This was a really good missing scene. I liked the extra glimpses of the Campbells and Sam's possessiveness of Dean. Well done, guys.

triquetralmoon September 28 2010, 13:44:52 UTC

Thank you for reading!

I really have an urge to write "quiet Campbell" fic, because I like him and I think he's going to be a good guy.

I'm so glad you liked it!

maypoles September 28 2010, 13:35:15 UTC

YOU GUYS. ♥

“Quiet now,” Sam says, his voice cracking. “Shut the fuck up. Please, man. You fucking talk too much when you’re out of it like this. Can’t ever shut up, can you?” As desperate as Sam’s been to hear his brother’s voice - it can’t be about that, never about that.

I really love that part. You've captured that closed-off!Sam from the premiere, while also giving us the tender brotherly moments I would have looooved to see onscreen. Nice job.

triquetralmoon September 28 2010, 13:46:55 UTC

Aww! Thank you!

You've captured that closed-off!Sam from the premiere, while also giving us the tender brotherly moments I would have looooved to see onscreen.

I'm so happy it struck you that way.