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Fic: Capture the Flag 18/24

May 13, 2010 12:27

Title: Capture the Flag
Author: triquetralmoon
Rating: R
Genre: H/C (respiratory illness, PTSD)
Warnings: Swearing, violence, flashbacks of graphic torture

Spoilers: Season 4, this is set in between Criss Angel Is a Douchebag and Sex and Violence.

Summary: A soldier in the war to stop the apocalypse, Dean is running himself into the ground as he runs away ( Read more... )

capture the flag, fic, ptsd, respiratory illness, did i mention supernatural illness?

Comments 8

borgmama1of5 May 13 2010, 16:44:00 UTC

1. Admiring your supporting characters--well-fleshed out.

2. Still think this is a REALLY BAD IDEA, Dean.

3. Just what I need, a story making me a nervous wreck while being a nervous wreck already waiting for tonight's episode.

triquetralmoon May 13 2010, 17:33:27 UTC

1. Thanks! It isn't in the story, but Ross wears the tie when he finally gets up the guts to ask Nina out. She says yes.

3. Finale, finale, finale, finale!!! :) :) :)

deangirl1 May 13 2010, 17:25:42 UTC

OMG -- Dean giving the tie to Ross was perfect! And the picture! Awwwww! I knew Dean was going to do something stupid like this... I really hope we do get to see Doogie again...

triquetralmoon May 13 2010, 18:29:12 UTC

Hey, Dean is super proud of his plan. This has nothing to do with him having something to prove. Nope. Nothing. Not one bit. ;)

Glad you liked Dean getting to play big brother to someone else. Right after this fic they're heading into "Sex and Violence," so we know this is something he's searching for.

deangirl1 May 13 2010, 20:27:29 UTC

I'm really enjoying the interplay of when you've set this episode-wise with how you are playing with their characterizations - really bang on!

triquetralmoon May 13 2010, 21:55:07 UTC

Oh wow! Thank you! The S4 sandbox was/is challenging to play in for me. Hard to reconcile an uplifting conclusion with both the boys still stuck in their own issues. When this is all finished up, you'll have to let me know if you think the ending works.

embroiderama May 14 2010, 00:29:53 UTC

Oh man, this seems like a bad idea, but I totally believe Dean would insist on it. BTW, I really like Dr. Doogie.

triquetralmoon May 14 2010, 00:39:07 UTC

I'm happy it sounds to you like that's something Dean would do.

Ross is a good egg. :) I may have to bring him back for another fic at some point.