Fic: Capture the Flag 16/?

[triquetralmoon]

Title: Capture the Flag
Author: triquetralmoon
Rating: R
Genre: H/C (respiratory illness, PTSD)
Warnings: Swearing, violence, flashbacks of graphic torture

Spoilers: Season 4, this is set in between Criss Angel Is a Douchebag and Death Takes a Holiday.

Summary: A soldier in the war to stop the apocalypse, Dean is running himself into the ground as he runs

Comments

[embroiderama]

Eeeep, oh man! Dean realizing that he does have a lot of those symptoms was sad, and the ghost was scary. Yay for Bobby!

[triquetralmoon]

Yeah. I kinda felt like a bitch writing Dean to be sitting there alone while he came to that realization. I'm such a meanie.

[deangirl1]

Poor Dean! Not knowing if it was real or PTSD and then having a real flashback... and Sam-- grrrrrr - I spent most of S4 mad at him and now I want to smack him upside the head again! And Yeah Bobby to the rescue!

[triquetralmoon]

Yeah, a weird mix of fever dream, PTSD, and the ghost trying to push his buttons.

Sam does need a good smack.

[borgmama1of5]

I appreciate the delicate dance you are doing with both boys to dance through their damaged psyches to justify what they're doing to themselves and each other!

[triquetralmoon]

Aw! Thanks! :)

(..delicate dance through damaged psyches...alliteration, for the win!!)

[hoodietime]

I was biting my nails reading this! Awesome, awesome.

[triquetralmoon]

Yay! Hopefully no manicures were destroyed.

[legendof12world]

Wow, I just started reading and kept on plowing through till the end of this chapter. Poor Dean. God, now I really want to know what happens but it tells me I don't have access to the next chapter? What gives?