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triptohere

On Knots and Unravelling - Chapter Twelve

May 18, 2011 18:58

For author's notes and thank yous, see chapter one.

( Chapter Twelve )

Comments 4

Drunk Cook and Naomi, FTW! expatbeth May 18 2011, 19:35:41 UTC

Well, I've appreciated your sense of humour in every chapter, but this one actually had me cackling like a maniac -- which seemed to alarm both my spouse and our cats, though I rather enjoyed it ( ... )

canon90 May 18 2011, 21:40:49 UTC

Cook and Naomi, the best lesbros the world has ever seen ♥

I seriously can't. I loved this chapter so much and it had me in stitches.

Cook staggers to his feet, and drags her out by her foot, till they’re both lying on the pavement, unable to move.

Hilarious.

The Katie/Naomi scene was sweet. I'm hopeful that they'll be able to work things out somehow.

NE make my heart happy :')

condor84 May 20 2011, 02:32:00 UTC

I love this fic, but i get a bit sad knowing there's only two chapters left.

holeybubushka May 26 2011, 11:30:18 UTC

Claps. Genius, as always

*cough* Sophia interlude *cough*

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also, did Emily bone JJ in this? I can't figure out if she did.....