Thank you! The thing I don't like about some D/S fic is that they tend to ignore the whole Jack "thing", or they gloss over the fact that redefining *any* relationhip after eight years is going to entail some awkwardness and pain. :)
It is so much fun to read your writing again...even for a show that I don't know. I will say, though, that whether or not I'm familiar with these characters didn't stop me from enjoying this story in the slightest. In fact, it probably helped me pick up on the little details that you include that show me what the characters are like without beating me over the head with description. Nicely done!
I parcticularly love this: "She’s soft and sleepy-eyed and he thinks that maybe he’s a little in love with her despite the fact that he kissed her for the first time only two hours ago. Well, fuck."
Lizisita! I'm glad you liked!! I know how hard it is to read fanfic about a show you're not familiar with, so THANK YOU for reading and taking the time to comment. :-)
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I parcticularly love this: "She’s soft and sleepy-eyed and he thinks that maybe he’s a little in love with her despite the fact that he kissed her for the first time only two hours ago. Well, fuck."
LOL! :)
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You're awesome!
We have a lot in common. :-)
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