Midnight's Nocturne

Nov 30, 2011 22:48

Title: Midnight's Nocturne
Author: tripatch
Rating: R
Pairing: Nick/Monroe
Summary: For the kinkmeme prompt, "Nick is having a really rough time with all things Grimm -- maybe he tangled with something particularly nasty, maybe he's having nightmares, maybe he split with Juliette because of his new calling, or maybe it's just a been a bad week -- but he's ( Read more... )

pairing: nick/monroe, length: short, fandom: grimm, warning: violence, genre: hurt/comfort, rating: r, genre: angst, fic: midnight's nocturne, status: complete

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flatliner345 December 1 2011, 08:07:18 UTC
*wibble* This was absolutely heartbreaking. You've done a great job with this prompt!

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tripatch December 1 2011, 21:23:25 UTC
♥!

Thank you so much!

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rabidchild December 1 2011, 17:35:01 UTC
Beautiful, heartrending and poignant. I love this. What a great interpretation of the prompt.

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tripatch December 1 2011, 21:23:05 UTC
Thank you! ♥ It turned out... really darker, considering my usual fare--I'm glad it worked for you, though!

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virgo_79 December 1 2011, 21:57:09 UTC
This is exquisite. Your descriptions, the atmosphere, the dialogue -- everything. And I love the abrupt shift in Eddie's demeanor as it hits him that something's very wrong. And those little, light touches to Nick speak volumes. The dynamic between them here is wonderful.

Thank you! I *love* this!

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tripatch December 1 2011, 22:46:07 UTC
Awwe! Thank you! ♥

(Apparently I can do something other than 'adorable'! Who knew?)

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vinna7 December 2 2011, 04:09:04 UTC
Heartbreaking. I like how quickly Eddie realized something bad had gone down and how willing he was to help.

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tripatch December 2 2011, 12:22:19 UTC
I figure it's one of those things that Eddie would be very attune to, sensing something is wrong.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! ♥

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hoosierbitch December 3 2011, 20:49:49 UTC
Holy crapmonkeys. This is beautiful. It's eloquent and tragic without veering towards the melodramatic at all. Dayum.

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tripatch December 3 2011, 23:08:38 UTC
♥ Thank you! I'm glad to hear it didn't get too melodramatic (I, uh, can do that sometimes... a lot of times...), so I'm really glad it worked for you!

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