Nameless One, 15/

Aug 16, 2011 14:11

Title: Nameless One
Author: tripatch
Rating: R
Pairing: Hannibal/Face
Summary: Kinkmeme prompt, Face secretly takes meds for bipolar disorder. But for whatever reason, Face is no longer on his meds. Then the manic behavior starts, from getting into a mess of fights to needing to have tons of sex with strangers. Then when the emotional roller coaster stuff ( Read more... )

length: long, pairing: hannibal/face, fic: nameless one, warning: attempted suicide, warning: bipolar, fandom: the a-team, genre: hurt/comfort, rating: r, genre: angst, status: wip

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danang1970 August 17 2011, 00:35:55 UTC
This chapter is so short, sweet and beautiful that it very nearly made me well up. Don't know how you do that, but well freaking done. :)

So you gotta make a choice whether the crazy is who you are or whether you’re too afraid to find out who you are without it.

Perfect.

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tripatch August 22 2011, 18:24:38 UTC
♥ I'm not sure how I'm doing it, either, but apparently it's working. ;)

You always seem to pinpoint the lines that I'm most proud of and it makes me so happy. Thank you so much for being such a regular reviewer--I look forward to your comments every time I update.

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indigo_angels August 17 2011, 12:53:15 UTC
Oh I love love love love love this! Still so beautifully bleak, but with that tiny hint of sunlight just appearing in the distance.

You write both types of episode so well - describing the depression as feeling nothing is just perfect.

And how did I miss all these updates???? I don't understand - you know I loved the start and I kept checking back every few days but didn't see anything until now. Confused... I must have bookmarked a bit where the updates didn't show until you did your table? Maybe - but not to worry, found it again now, and I love it!

Your writing is so minimalistic but damned powerful. Looking forward to the rest!

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tripatch August 17 2011, 15:55:32 UTC
♥ I'm so glad you like it!

And hmm, I don't know what's going on with that, maybe livejournal being typical livejournal-esque? But I'm glad it showed up again. It's almost finished, I promise.

Thank you again so much for the kind words. Hope the rest lives up to expectations!

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somewhatcliche August 22 2011, 00:04:51 UTC
How did I not know this existed?? I only stumbled across this today, and I am in love. The progression of the chapters, the insights you are giving to the characters who love Face-and Face himself, of course-without it getting sappy, ridiculous, or out of character. They're still Rangers, and I really think you've got this whole situation down pat.

I devoured this in one go! I am excited to see how you finish it off :)

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tripatch August 22 2011, 18:18:32 UTC
I'm so happy to find you discovered it--and liked it! I'm really glad that it's working for you, and that it's not sappy or OOC.

Thank you so much for the review. I've had the last part written for ages, but the middle part is giving me fits. Hopefully it'll be up soon, though, and I hope it lives up to expectations!

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delonariel September 5 2011, 21:46:23 UTC
This is really something. You have a real talent for putting emotions into words and creating an atmosphere and I'm just amazed at how accurately you describe what that roller-coaster feels like.

I don't usually read stuff that gets me too emotional, but you really had my eyes tearing up a couple of times.

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tripatch September 19 2011, 00:19:14 UTC
Thank you so much for your review!

I'm sorry that I made you tear up, but I'm glad it was accurate and moving for you!

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yuki_n_hidaka February 29 2012, 11:34:01 UTC
Please tell me you've finished this amazing story and I just can't see the other chapters because I'm having a silly moment!!?!

I feel so much for Face - and poor Hannibal, havin the knowledge that the one you love is/was lying to you... Good group effort in being there for our Faceman!

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tripatch March 2 2012, 07:25:05 UTC
Unfortunately, I haven't - I am planning on getting to it (I even have the last parts written), but the middle part is giving me trouble and I've also been really busy with real life. I promise I will be finishing it (though I will be posting it at my dreamwidth journal, http://www.jackofknaves.dreamwidth.org ).

Thank you for reading, though - I'm glad you like it so well! ♥

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