Hermitknut's Challenge

[trinitys_sin]

‘On penance plates you dine -
There’s better board to come.’
The warming, heady wine
then freed his mind for fun.
The guilt should be working through them. Winding its way from their guts to squeeze at their lungs and make it hard for them to breathe. It should clutch at their hearts, choke them ‘til the food refuses to slide down their throats. But

Comments

[hermitknut]

Interesting take on the rhyme; I like it :D

All three are really good work - I look forward to the last two! Hope everything's good where you are :)

HK

[xthursdaynextx]

Interesting and very descriptive. I like the idea of Merlin and Arthur being a bit wicked.

[trinitys_sin]

I really like writing them a bit darker and this bit of the poem seemed to call for it.