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Fic: The Prize 10/16

Jan 05, 2012 19:11

Title:The Prize
Author: trillsabells
Beta: jupiter_ash
Rating: NC17
Length: This Chapter 6300, overall nearly 100k
Spoilers: None
Summary: On 29 January 2010 an unknown Event wiped out 98% of the population. This is the story of the survivors, four months on. Based on this prompt here
Warnings (for entire fic): Starts with the death of over 6 billion people and goes downhill ( Read more... )

post apocalyptic, the prize, slash, fanfic, sherlock

Comments 28

pillow_face January 5 2012, 19:35:48 UTC

I really enjoyed the build up to the porn, Sherlock being so gentle and intimate with simple actions. Sherlock just appearing at an unreasonable hour and straddling him is always a hilarious bonus. Despite actually finally getting somewhere with his feelings, I see Sherlock is still pretty much failing at human interaction. Oh well, if he didn't he wouldn't be the Sherlock we all know and love.
Also still hate Seb even if he is still perfectly innocent (maybe because I'm expecting him to turn out to be a right bastard).

sabrinaphynn January 5 2012, 19:52:06 UTC

Yeah.... What pillow said.
But also....
\o/ Woot! porn! \o/

lillianone January 5 2012, 21:37:45 UTC

What Sabrina said
XD

This verse is so great and updates feel like home made cookies.

trillsabells January 10 2012, 17:39:44 UTC

What if I actually gave you home made cookies?

( ... )

Thread 7

cloudsofsmoke January 5 2012, 20:32:49 UTC

Making an extremely high pitched [aaaaaaaaaaaaa] noise with sheer glee. And then at the end it was like "what are you doing?! Get back in bed with him right now! Kiss him properly RIGHT NOW!" so annoyed with Sherlock messing John about. Grrr. Thanks for another awesome update, waiting eagerly for the next bit! : D x

trillsabells January 10 2012, 17:44:39 UTC

Kiss him? Sherlock needs to talk to him the silly boy *smacks him upside the head*

Glad you like it! Thanks for commenting

thesmallhobbit January 5 2012, 21:55:23 UTC

Typical Sherlock to be surprised by his feelings for John. At least he stood up to Mycroft. He'd better take good care of John.

ETA Forgot to say how much I enjoyed the chapter.

trillsabells January 10 2012, 17:46:50 UTC

Thank you!

Feeling are always surprising to Sherlock. In this scenario he has too much time to think, to over analyse things. He jumped ahead of himself somewhat and that was... surprising.

lbmisscharlie January 5 2012, 22:33:23 UTC

Oh, yay, boys. I love the beginning, with John's little enthralled entourage, because I'm firmly convinced that it would definitely not only be Sherlock finding in!command!Doctor Watson totally hot interesting. And then porn to round it out, yay!

trillsabells January 10 2012, 17:48:15 UTC

Who wouldn't find in!command!Doctor Watson hot?

Glad you liked!

rte_175 January 6 2012, 03:32:09 UTC

Of course the first time I comment is on the porn chapter, but in my defense, I did read chapters 9 and 10 today! :-) I just wanted to chime in to let you know that I've really been enjoying your post-apocalyptic fic. You've got a lot of mystery going on, with the collectors and even Seb--I don't know whether to trust him or not! And I love how you are developing Sherlock and John's relationship. Can't wait to read more!

trillsabells January 10 2012, 17:49:52 UTC

Thanks! There's more porn next chapter so I'll look forward to your comment for that as well ;)

Good to hear you're enjoying it especially the mysteries. All will be revealed.