Fanfic: The Credulity of Youth (3/5)

Nov 03, 2010 09:08

Title: The Credulity of Youth
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adventure, credulity of youth, fanfic, kids, sherlock

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errantcomment November 3 2010, 10:05:31 UTC
HA.
Oh my god, you totally did. <3
Also. Child!John. I want one.
In the jumper.
Hmm. I have a nephew about a year old.
Maybe I should take up knitting...

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errantcomment November 3 2010, 10:06:47 UTC
Also. FIRST.

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trillsabells November 3 2010, 14:51:59 UTC
Of course I did... and it was AWESOME!

I love John in the jumper. I was not about to pass up on the chance to have child!John in a wooly jumper

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errantcomment November 3 2010, 15:31:19 UTC
Yeah, you're totally responsible for the glee-face I have. :p

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i_sudoku November 3 2010, 12:58:34 UTC
I normally feel weary about kid!fic but you did extremely well. It's funny but also full of action. I LOL the part about teaching solar system to Sherlock and how much damage can John do to Sherlock as he would eventually turn up like Sherlock.

How evil of you to make a cliffhanger like this :)

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trillsabells November 3 2010, 14:53:12 UTC
I love evil cliffies, always have...

I'm glad you like it and hope the rest has enough action to keep you interested. Don't worry, there's plenty of BAMF moments coming up

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batgurl10 November 3 2010, 14:07:06 UTC
this story has captured my attention!!! BRavo U.

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trillsabells November 3 2010, 14:54:06 UTC
Yay! Happy to have caught your attention and pleased you like it

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trillsabells November 3 2010, 14:59:36 UTC
Putting it back will definitely be a challenge...

Something to look forward to there (although it's probably awful science)

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lurkerlynne November 3 2010, 14:38:04 UTC
Hah! I though the water was excess body mass! :D

That being said; Oh, no! Lestrade! Part of me is sincerely hoping he stays adult and gets stuck with two kids and an escape attempt. Those two kids, attempting to escape.

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trillsabells November 3 2010, 15:02:08 UTC
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No seriously I can't think of a single thing to say to that that wouldn't be a spoiler.

You... no I can't say it. We'll have to catch up once you've finished the story because really you...

Gah!

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lurkerlynne November 3 2010, 15:15:15 UTC
Suddenly I feel the need to apologize for possibly hitting plot points. Sorry? ^_^

I will completely understand if you delete my comment in the interest of keeping certain things secret. It's happened before.

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trillsabells November 3 2010, 15:20:30 UTC
No no your comment is fine, it's me I'm worried about. I just really really want to say things about what you've put and... gah! Can't!

Can't even say why not!

You're not on twitter at all, are you? Could give you a proper reply over there.

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