Doctor Who fic

Mar 21, 2010 21:16

Sooooo.... I was digging around in my Current Writage folder (which is more like Everything Written in the Past Year folder), and came across this. It's, well... utterly without redeeming value. It's pure smut, for one thing, and rather improbable smut, on top of that. No matter how much my fangirl brain, not to mention Jack's, may dream. Le sigh.

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doctor who, fic, jack loves the doctor, jack/ten

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wendy_bird March 23 2010, 00:51:48 UTC
Oh. Oh, this is just so lovely. The writing is expressive with great use of metaphors and you have The Doctor and Jack down pat. And the sex scene... God. *dies* Please keep writing these two, this is great!

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trill_gutterbug March 23 2010, 05:29:14 UTC
Oh, my God. I'm so glad you like it! I wrote it a while back, before I'd watched a lot of the later seasons of DW, so I wasn't too sure about characterization. :D And I'm pretty sure there's no way I could *stop* writing these two. They demand it!

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shane_mayhem March 23 2010, 05:56:28 UTC
Fantastic first post! (or any post, really).

I love how you write a hot, detailed sex scene and keep the two of them in character all the while. And of course, I love the Doctor being...beguiled...by Jack.

Brilliant!

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trill_gutterbug March 24 2010, 05:27:18 UTC
Thank you a gazillion times! You're a doll. :)

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sweetmusic_27 March 23 2010, 06:17:23 UTC
Oooo, totally hot. I so want to know what happens...

Does Jack wake up the next day wondering if it was all a dream, and the Doctor surprises him with affection at the Tardis console? Does the Doctor slip away that night, pretending everything's normal for weeks on end, until suddenly surprising Jack with a trip to the planet of Remote Trysting Areas?

Tell us, tell us!

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trill_gutterbug March 24 2010, 05:28:53 UTC
These things worry at my brain, as well. I can totally see the Doctor being all, "Huh, okay, whatever, moving on," or just glomping Jack like a crazy person afterward. I don't know if I'll continue on with this story (although it's absolutely possible) but I know I won't be able to kick my Jack/Ten bug anytime soon. :D

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samueljames March 23 2010, 09:12:17 UTC
It might be smut but it's eloquent smut. Very in character to have the Doctor not immediately fall for Jack's charms.

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trill_gutterbug March 24 2010, 05:29:47 UTC
Thanks a huge truckload. I don't know if my writing (much less my smut, of which there is a lot) has ever been called eloquent, before. You're so nice. :)

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knm1234 March 23 2010, 09:37:14 UTC
God god, that was astounding. I've been reading loads of slash lately but this is just so well done. Barely any conversation to start, and Jack's doubts, and... well, hot as hell too. Just great.

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trill_gutterbug March 24 2010, 05:31:05 UTC
Aw, I can't even tell you how happy it makes me that you like it! So sweet of you to take the time to comment. I love it when people use words like "astounding" and "hot as hell" about my smutty smut. :D

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