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[KH] Memories of the Broken: Prologue

Feb 15, 2009 07:54

Title: Memories of the Broken
Author: Trilies
Genre General, Drama
Word length 1640
Sypnosis Every assassin has his beginning. For Aramuil Schäfer, it was in a dirty camp past hope with a pink triangle on his shoulder. The story of who Marluxia used to be.
Rating PG-16, for unpleasant imagery
( His hands won't stop shaking. )

marluxia, motb, kh fanfiction

Comments 6

lolochan February 16 2009, 21:09:26 UTC

This is off to a very good start. I'll readily admit I'm a sucker for the tragic back story, which would make me rather un-objective as a reader. The whole Holocaust cliche is overplayed, but usually in the AU sense. Since it sounds like you're aiming for canon, I am very intrigued and cannot wait to see how it plays out.

Your sister sounds a lot like mine. One of my originals (The Memory Keeper) is based on what she told me about a story in her head that she was too lazy to write down. In my case it was more of a "never give your sister intellectual property" type of thing. :D

Good luck on your fic. I hope it doesn't take another two months for the next chapter to come out. Until next time!

trilies February 16 2009, 22:07:10 UTC

Heh, would it be sad if I admitted that I personally didn't know it was a cliche up until I actually started writing this? And then Holocaust AUs just started popping up everywhere I went. I think the internet just wants to spite me sometimes.

I'm glad I'm not the only one with a lazy sister. XD

Anyway, I'm glad you liked this! The actual first chapter should be up later this week, so you won't have to wait two months. Hope you stay along for the rest of the story!

at_splicken February 25 2009, 16:35:19 UTC

Ahhhh, I really think I'm going to have to play Bioshock now. XD
Great, one more thing for me to get addicted to. XD
And you don't have to thank me, I'm just really lazy and selfish. And you spoil me too much. XD

trilies February 25 2009, 19:59:17 UTC

I see nothing wrong with hopefully getting you addicted to that. XD
Besides, you'll get to meet Bridgette, who totally pulls a Zexion by screwing over things! In the past. Not in the game. In the game, you first meet Bridgette when she aims a gun at you. :D

And shut up and take your thanks. XD

at_splicken February 25 2009, 22:51:41 UTC

XD Oh yeah, now I really want to play. I've got another week and a half to play, so. XD
Lol I really don't need another game addiction, I srsly dreamed about WoW the last two nights because I didn't get to play.

Ok lol, I take my thanks. XD *cough*spoilmetoomuch*cough*

trilies February 25 2009, 22:56:04 UTC

Yaaaaay!
Oooh, I can't wait for you to play it. It'll be so much more fun and itneresting to talk with you about MotB and I'll be able to tell you about Marluxia's Heartless and not have you get confused and YES.
-does a happy dance of happiness-

All this talk of Bioshock keeps reminding me of our side RP there. XD Bridgette had a shotgun on Marluxia before he could get a word in edgewise, it was hilarious.