SGA Fic: Line of Communication

Mar 18, 2009 15:19

The more I work on a long story, the more the smaller plot bunnies hop around demanding attention.  I gave in to one of them...

Title: Line of Communication 
Author: tridget
Genre: Gen, H/C, Friendship, Team
Rating: PG for mild language and non-graphic references to injury/violence
Warnings: See Ratings
Word Count: 2577
Summary: John is injured and separated ( Read more... )

character: ronon dex, genre: angst, character: john sheppard, genre: shepwhump, genre: gen, sga, character: teyla emmagen, author: tridget, stargate atlantis, character: rodney mckay, genre: h/c, fanfiction, genre: team

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wildcat88 March 18 2009, 21:57:07 UTC
Yay!! It's posted. Good job. I especially liked Rodney tugging on the string one last time.

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tridget March 19 2009, 00:01:40 UTC
Thank you again for being such a great beta reader. I am learning so much as I write.

That last moment with the string was one of those writing points when the scene sort of existed already and I just had to write it down as opposed to feeling like I created the moment. It's hard to describe, but sometimes the stories and characters just take on a life of their own.

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kriadydragon March 18 2009, 23:18:21 UTC
Oh! *sniffles* No words can describe the sweetness. That was gorgeous, just gorgeous :D

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tridget March 19 2009, 02:33:19 UTC
Thank you. I have been enjoying reading and writing about the unique ways in which Rodney is able to provide comfort.

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black_raven135 March 19 2009, 00:41:57 UTC
Even cell distance cannot keep them apart........
***hugs Sheppard***
and
his team.........
Great story.....
I need my Sheppard fix daily...
>:-)

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tridget March 19 2009, 02:47:19 UTC
I don't think anything can truly separate them.

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tridget March 19 2009, 02:55:10 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. I think the isolation was one of the worst things that could happen to them and one of the things they'd fight hardest to overcome. I almost felt kinda bad for them as I was writing it.

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padawan_aneiki March 19 2009, 01:52:22 UTC
*SNIFF!* Oh this was well done. :) I also liked the little tug on the string at the end. :)

Very cool, indeed. *claps*

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tridget March 19 2009, 03:04:57 UTC
The special bonds of this team and the ways in which they connect with one another really make them cool to write about.

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