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trickylady

First Heroes Oneshot -- hopefully not the last

Jan 06, 2011 02:04

Title: Thin Line
Author: yours truly
Pairing: Peter/Sylar
Fandom: Heroes
Genre: slight angst, fluff, smut
Rating: NC-17 for sex!fail
Disclaimer: I own nothing, but I always wish I do.
Summary: Maybe there was another reason Peter so vehemently denied Sylar as his brother. (Season 3, if I recall)
Spoilers: Hopefully none. Just me reading between ( Read more... )

smut, heroes fanfic, oneshot, pylar, peter/sylar, angst, fanfic, petlar

Comments 15

midorihaven January 6 2011, 07:26:39 UTC

^^b

trickylady January 6 2011, 07:31:34 UTC

sore dakeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
-disappointed- lol

midorihaven January 6 2011, 09:15:37 UTC

no disappoint~ I loved it

lornrocks January 6 2011, 07:44:19 UTC

I'm sorta glad I know they're not really brothers, cause the incest thing always squicks me.

But I did like this, especially the part when Sylar's just so sad on the stairs and Peter feels the overwhelming urge to comfort him. Very in character.

trickylady January 6 2011, 08:03:23 UTC

you're quite a fast reader, lol

yeah, I'm not really into the incest thing either -- and deep down, I think they knew they could never be related. so I went for it.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
-bows-

lornrocks January 6 2011, 08:16:54 UTC

I'm sure Sylar was just desperate to believe he had a family who cared and Peter was like AW HELL NAH. :P

I'd love to see more of your writing in our lovely comm.

trickylady January 6 2011, 08:28:37 UTC

hehe, that's true. but then again, I think peter would have eventually accepted him if Sylar hadn't acquired the lie detector power. lol

well the lovely comments certainly encourage me to continue, I must say. thanks again~

thegreyhawke January 6 2011, 08:13:05 UTC

Great fic. I like the dark/angst, personally, but it ended nicely and was saved from total angst by the lighter, smutty ending. Good job. I want a sequel ;)

trickylady January 6 2011, 08:29:57 UTC

well, I was deciding whether to keep it dark and have a bad ending, but then emo!sylar told me he wanted a happy ending, so I let him have it.

thanks for reading..and perhaps....if I can muster up some more energy another day, heh

thanks for reading!

punk4life1315 January 6 2011, 12:28:45 UTC

wonderful fic! I'm so glad that they didn't turn out to be real brothers in the series :D

trickylady January 7 2011, 01:39:35 UTC

thank you. <3
and so am i, lol. you have no idea how much I ship them. heh.

game_byrd January 6 2011, 13:11:11 UTC

Great fic! I loved it and I second the request for more of your lovely writings in the comm! I need to do more one-shots.

I'm glad you gave some exploration and depth to Peter having to deal with the idea of Sylar as his brother. In the show, it was all over from one scene to the next. In one, it was revealed and in the next Peter accepted it as fact - a little disgruntled, but going with it. I like in your story that he has more of an emotional response. I know I sure would, to find out I had a sibling, much less to find out it was my enemy, the serial killer.

trickylady January 7 2011, 01:41:37 UTC

Aww, thank you. I was worried certain fandoms wouldn't respond as well to my type of writing. heh.

I really felt like they cut his reaction too short and forced him into a sickening state before he could even rebel against his family. or perhaps his attempt to kill his mother was subconsciously his rebellion against her lies?

thanks so much for commenting. <3