FIC: Lies I Have Created

[tricky_slip]

Title: Lies I Have Created
Fandom: Jackass/Viva La Bam/CKY
Pairing: Bam Margera/Ryan Dunn
Word Count: 1,263
Rating: T

Comments

[the_bluechannel]

You go to remember what it’s like to be alone. And not the kind that eats you from the inside out, not the destroying kind of loneliness. But the soft, gentle whisper of quiet that only really comes when you are alone with someone who makes you forget what that word means.
That line right there, my love, is absolutely amazing. I responded to it out loud with a noise of appreciation of some sort.

Shit girl. Why do you insist on breaking my heart? The end of this, that last bit... Absolute perfection. While reading through it, and with the poetic way it's written, I was wondering how you were going to tie it all together in the end. But you did it in a way that caught me so off guard and it was beautiful and. I just love this, babe. You did really well.

[tricky_slip]

Thanks, love. I'm glad you liked it.
I was actualy quite worried about that last little bit and how well everything would tie together, so it's a relief to know that it did. I just wanted to get it over and done with already and out of my head. ^_^
♥♥♥

[the_bluechannel]

You're so welcome, love.

[kattrip033]

Very powerfully written.

[tricky_slip]

Thanks so much for reading. ♥♥

[kattrip033]

Your welcome.

[rollerager]

This is amazing. :)
You are very good at descriptions, making the reader FEEL what the character is feeling. I also like how you compare things. It's very interesting. Great job!

[tricky_slip]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
♥♥

[mildly_neurotic]

That was well writting. Soul crushing, but very well written. :-)

Thank you! No one writes Dugera anymore so you made my day.

[tricky_slip]

I don't think I can ever write anything even remotely upbeat. But I'm glad you liked it, regardless. ^^

Dugera definitly needs some more love. ♥