Drabble request

Jul 17, 2007 17:23

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Mohinder Suresh / Peter Petrelli / written all over your face for herverylowness

Rating: PG
Words: 247
Summary: Peter always wore his emotions on his sleeve
A/N: Thanks to futuresoon for letting my bounce the idea off her and giving me advice on it. All mistakes are mine. Feedback much appreiciated.

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herverylowness July 17 2007, 11:33:25 UTC
Oh this was so sweet! I loved this:

And that was why he had leaned in closer when they were talking, breaking the geneticist off in mid-sentence and kissing him lightly on the lips even as the blood rushed to his head and he realised what he was doing only after those few infinite seconds.

“Oh shit, I’m sorry. I’m sorry.” Peter pushed away, flustered. Stupid, bad, wrong. The words that haunted him swam back into his mind again. He swallowed.

Just utterly perfect!

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tricias_flaunt July 18 2007, 01:06:25 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you like it since you were the one who chose the pairing from the list.

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herverylowness July 18 2007, 01:46:19 UTC
^_^

I'd squee over Mohinder/Peter if it was written like this:

Peter kissed Mohinder and they both liked it.
The End.

But this was soooo much better. *dances*

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coldmemory July 17 2007, 14:16:32 UTC
Hey, this was really good! Would you consider posting it at peter_mohinder

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tricias_flaunt July 18 2007, 01:07:41 UTC
Took your suggestion and posted it at peter_mohinder. Glad you liked it and thanks a lot for your comment!

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ej_fanart July 17 2007, 23:32:35 UTC
OMG, so bloody sweeeet!!!! Love it!! :D

Thank you!! :)

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tricias_flaunt July 18 2007, 01:08:14 UTC
Welcome! Glad you liked it! Thanks for your comment.

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tracker_lucifer July 18 2007, 02:20:04 UTC
Awwwww... That so cute. :O *gives a cookie*

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tricias_flaunt July 19 2007, 04:17:41 UTC
*takes cookie* Thanks! Glad you liked it! *munch*

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eonism July 18 2007, 04:42:50 UTC
Very cute, :3

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tricias_flaunt July 19 2007, 04:17:57 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it!

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