Team Het: Little White Ones

[mad_maudlin]

Title: Little White Ones
Author: Mizaya
Team: Team Het
Prompt: Lies
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: Ron/Lavender turned Ron/Hermione
Warnings: None
Length: 1,078
Summary: "The naked truth is always better than the best dressed lie" -Anne Landers
Author's Notes: Not my usual fare, but I hope you enjoy it!

Comments

[aome]

Ah what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive.... I really liked how you made use of HBP canon - nicely done.

[jamimegan]

Thank you! I was afraid it would be boring to rehash canon, but I'm glad you liked it!

[hildigunnur]

Love your use of the Ron/Lavender relationship in HBP, showing us the Ron aspect of things, and I feel that you've pretty much nailed Ron's attitude to Lavender, how justified that might have been.

Great job!

[jamimegan]

Thank you so much! I appreciate what you said about Ron and his attitude with Lavender--that was definitely my focus.

[wolfiekins]

For the first time in their relationship, Ron was telling the truth, and for the first time Lavender thought he was lying.

Isn't that the way of it? Very nicely done!

[jamimegan]

All too often, yes. Thank you!

"little white ones"

[verdenia]

Ah, great job--I can totally see Ron being passive in his words so he can get some action! ;P

Very funny with some of the exchanges between him and Lav!

Re: "little white ones"

[jamimegan]

Thank you! I tried to inject a little humor in there, so I appreciate you saying that!

[abigail89]

Wow, I can totally see this happening in Ron's head. Very nice use of canon. Well done!

[jamimegan]

Thank you very much!